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Tiago_Maia_1922
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2024-11-25 02:24

its been a while but why no more updates??

The Extra Wants Control

Kas73_
4.2
193 Chs

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covestar
covestarLv14

The plot is good, however, stop trying to be fancy with words and speak direct and proper English. Every sentence seems so fancy and it seems like author tries to be poetic but it fails because it comes out as bland. It’s fine to use figure of speech, fancy words, indirect words.. but when the writing is the same throughout, it just seems bland and boring. Infact I struggle to finish a chapter cuz it just sounds the same. Switch up the POV more often and stop with the poetry, it’s a novel not a poem. I admire the effort though. Good Job

10mth

billal_mohamed
billal_mohamedLv10

Amazing start.. Wish for more chapters 👍

11mth
relife
relifeLv13

The main character is not likeable. And the writing put me off. Not really easy to read.

8mth
Aziz_Yaakoubi
Aziz_YaakoubiLv4

Reveal spoiler

8mth
Muhamby
MuhambyLv14

I hate every single novel that start with the mc given a second chance by “God” because “insert a lazy reason here”.

9mth
FernandoRubio
FernandoRubioLv4

Por donde empezar,el transcurso de la historia es obra de arte como te presenta al MC, la perspectiva del porqué tiene esa actitud es excelente no puedo decir nada negativo ya que no soy muy bueno en ver puntos malos aparte de la traducción pero en esta historia es excelente,personaje despiadado,inteligente,con una pista de villano.🤌🤌🤌

11mth
Jose_6501
Jose_6501Lv1

It really has great potential. I hope you continue updating. And also please describe more and more. And also some chapters are very short just hope you make them a bit longer. Overall it's a great read hop you don't drop the novel.

11mth
DaoistxjmnAv
DaoistxjmnAvLv4

keep on updating [img=update][img=update]

11mth
_ZEPHYR_2
_ZEPHYR_2Lv3

Giving review from 2nd id😅 . Keep updating . 😌

9mth
_ZEPHYR_
_ZEPHYR_Lv13

The novel is good mc is smart, calculative and manipulator and strong too side character are also good eg :- Lara and Axl Hoping u don't drop it mostly authors drops when they don't get good response so just keep updating it will become one of the best novel ❤ . (highly recommended:- 9/10) cutting kne marks because No FL till now no romance..

9mth
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