Item: The Extra Wants Control
Rating: 5

billal_mohamedLv48mth

2024-03-17 06:11

Amazing start.. Wish for more chapters 👍

The Extra Wants Control

Kas73_

4.2

193 Chs

Liked by 7 people

Replies5

Kas73_Author

Thanks for the review. I'll try my best to update frequently.

8mth

RadpiplupLv13

harem or single lead?

Kas73_:Thanks for the review. I'll try my best to update frequently.

8mth

Kas73_Author

To be honest I haven't decided yet...I won't get into romance for now maybe later

Radpiplup:harem or single lead?

8mth

RadpiplupLv13

will you most likely go for harem or single lead?

Kas73_:To be honest I haven't decided yet...I won't get into romance for now maybe later

8mth

Christian_LynchLv2

bro where is the new chapters

Kas73_:Thanks for the review. I'll try my best to update frequently.

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