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Diaoist12
Diaoist12Lv1512mth
2024-05-01 10:26

I like this novel a lot so far, would love some illustrations of important characters. Would also love a chapter about how naveah was able to gather all the subordinates he has. Overall still room for improvement like all things but this novel is definitely my cup of tea for sure. Thank you author for the stable updates as well.

The Extra Wants Control

Kas73_
4.2
193 Chs

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Kas73_
Kas73_Author

Thanks for the review... about the subordinates they'll have their own flashback chapter in future their decisions will be very important to the plot... As for the illustrations I'll try to avail them

12mth
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covestar
covestarLv14

The plot is good, however, stop trying to be fancy with words and speak direct and proper English. Every sentence seems so fancy and it seems like author tries to be poetic but it fails because it comes out as bland. It’s fine to use figure of speech, fancy words, indirect words.. but when the writing is the same throughout, it just seems bland and boring. Infact I struggle to finish a chapter cuz it just sounds the same. Switch up the POV more often and stop with the poetry, it’s a novel not a poem. I admire the effort though. Good Job

11mth

billal_mohamed
billal_mohamedLv11

Amazing start.. Wish for more chapters 👍

1yr
relife
relifeLv13

The main character is not likeable. And the writing put me off. Not really easy to read.

9mth
Aziz_Yaakoubi
Aziz_YaakoubiLv4

Reveal spoiler

10mth
Muhamby
MuhambyLv14

I hate every single novel that start with the mc given a second chance by “God” because “insert a lazy reason here”.

11mth
FernandoRubio
FernandoRubioLv4

Por donde empezar,el transcurso de la historia es obra de arte como te presenta al MC, la perspectiva del porqué tiene esa actitud es excelente no puedo decir nada negativo ya que no soy muy bueno en ver puntos malos aparte de la traducción pero en esta historia es excelente,personaje despiadado,inteligente,con una pista de villano.🤌🤌🤌

1yr
Jose_6501
Jose_6501Lv1

It really has great potential. I hope you continue updating. And also please describe more and more. And also some chapters are very short just hope you make them a bit longer. Overall it's a great read hop you don't drop the novel.

1yr
DaoistxjmnAv
DaoistxjmnAvLv4

keep on updating [img=update][img=update]

1yr
_ZEPHYR_2
_ZEPHYR_2Lv3

Giving review from 2nd id😅 . Keep updating . 😌

11mth
_ZEPHYR_
_ZEPHYR_Lv13

The novel is good mc is smart, calculative and manipulator and strong too side character are also good eg :- Lara and Axl Hoping u don't drop it mostly authors drops when they don't get good response so just keep updating it will become one of the best novel ❤ . (highly recommended:- 9/10) cutting kne marks because No FL till now no romance..

11mth
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