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LunaKindred
LunaKindredLv36mth
2024-06-19 03:12

Sorry buddy, but I'll take my old review. This fic is very chinese, so much chinese references and it feels like I'm reading some xianxia bullsh– than reading a genshin fic and I can't handle it cz it's so weird for me. It just not my cup of a coffee, how sad

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ratuzin
ratuzinLv5

sorry but did you know that Genshin Impact is a Chinese game? I understand that it looks bad if you add 'BS cultivation' to the story, but Genshin is still a Chinese game and no one should complain about putting Chinese aspects into the story.

nacht
nachtLv14

yeah, genshin is a chinese company game, but at its root, it's more similar to Japanese anime than Chinese xianxia.

ratuzin:sorry but did you know that Genshin Impact is a Chinese game? I understand that it looks bad if you add 'BS cultivation' to the story, but Genshin is still a Chinese game and no one should complain about putting Chinese aspects into the story.
David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

The fic is just a chinese translation.

Spidergod8821
Spidergod8821Lv4

Doesn't tell us that it is one

David_Drake:The fic is just a chinese translation.
David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

Tags don't but author admits it in a comment

Spidergod8821:Doesn't tell us that it is one
Roxybr
RoxybrLv1

And because he wasn't the one who made this fan, he stole it.

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