Review Detail of MAXandMILLS in Not An Isekai Story

Okay, Here's a review, so far I have read three chapters and this is what I think, the writing quality is A bit mid, but I like the little world you create in my head, I like the way you started it when he was young telling a story to his daughter. Good. But so far, I haven't heard of any world changing threat yet. Maybe I'll see later on, but it should come early.