MAXandMILLS
Started Comeet Legacy as a rookie author and will improve my quality with every chapter and every new book to come :-)
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MAXandMILLS10hCommentedThen I quickly throw a punch at this bad-breath man in front of me! As if I lost all my control I kept punching his face over and over. As if I'm pouring out all the built-up emotions inside of me. I continue punching his face to the point it seems already disfigured and blood keeps flowing making him unrecognizable.- MAXandMILLS10hCommented
his father was accused of the fire? I'm a bit confused
He becomes busy with the fire incident until the day that evidence pointing to the Emperor as the arsonist behind the fire incident surfaced. The people especially the victims went mad after knowing that to the point that they burned the Emperor's Residence alongside your family. - MAXandMILLS22hReplied to Air_AceCh 1 Mayskeep
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nah, that's literally the Batcave
It was time to look at the monitors and check what were my enemies doing. So I went to the secret room. - MAXandMILLS1dReplied to Bloom759Ch 1 A sicko like myself
- MAXandMILLS2dCommented
and present continuous tense too, I'll be here for a long while bro
For now, I need to enter this secret room in front of me first. - MAXandMILLS2dCommented
it IS a first pov novel, what the-🔥
I made my way towards the room where I knew they had gathered while being trapped inside. I removed the wood and objects blocking the door, though I was the one who put them there to begin with. - MAXandMILLS2dCommentedCh 1 Prologue
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- MAXandMILLS2dReplied to Art6733Ch 8 Black Star [2]
- MAXandMILLS2dReplied to GodOfLiteratureCh 98 The calm before the storm
- MAXandMILLS2dReplied to Youngcreator
oh, yeah, true! thanks
This paragraph has been deleted. - MAXandMILLS3dReplied to Lucinda_Hacker
I will correct that, you have smart eyes
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sorry, it was just a quick round-up
[We have an Interrelationship of 60% and you just want to throw that out the window?] - MAXandMILLS6dCommentedAs the singing and festivities continued, no one noticed a very hurt and upset Ping'er wandering off tearfully away from the village. She hated everyone so much at the moment, that there were no words that can be used to describe her resentment. She felt so humiliated by Feng. And his– his wife?!! His stupid wife?!!!
- MAXandMILLS8dPosted
Mandatory Author Review Here! I've decided to drop this review at 100 chapters to provide you with an overall highlight of the story. If you are a fan of immersive sci-fi, this book has been tailor-made for you. It covers the entire evolution of science fiction, starting from the earth-level to the harnessing energy from stars and even time travel. I hope you follow me on this journey through and witness these. The story is built around a naive 17 year old (will later turn into a grown man) who has never been faced with such trials and responsibilities. Responsibilities that he will have to accept to save the extinction of humanity with the help of a chip which burrowed into the back of his neck and could speak to him. The characters in the story are incredibly diverse and unique, making it easy for you readers to become fans of them. Each character's behavior evolves with the story, and every single one of them plays an important role in the plot. The writing style may not be perfect, but I'm constantly improving with each chapter in my first book. Please point out any grammatical errors you come across. The pacing can be described as slightly above average. While a few themes were inspired by Star Wars, the majority of them were influenced by Star Trek. Nevertheless, the story itself is completely original. This is a tragedy novel as people get to die often in it. The red shade will be regularly imagined by you while you read. Not only does this novel focus on the plot and the pre-plot, it also gives a clear understanding of the motives and attitudes of the characters. Yes, this novel contains intergalactic wars and more deeper sci-fi context that are intertwined, providing plot twists and deeper insights that I believe novel readers will love. It has everything a reader might desire. I would love this to be one of the best books on this platform and I highly recommend it. Apologies if the word count in each chapter seems to be small, but it all changes from the 100th chapter. So please don't be deterred by the small chapters early on.
- MAXandMILLS9dReplied to Renee_WritesCh -1 Just For You
- MAXandMILLS10dReplied to Youngcreator