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Graviele
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2024-03-26 19:07

Author here.. I have had some comments about short chapters and few comments even calling my writing trash.. as it appeared to them that I have forcefully placed monologue in chapter. I want to clarify: 1. Every chapter I post will be around 1k words. I am not a professional writer and I do it for fun and enjoyment. 2. I tend to let the story progress at a moderate pace. I don't fill up with monologues. If wanted this check the auxiliary chapter.. I could have literally used that much information to add atleast 3 chapters... used those knowledge to fulfill conversation.. I could have had a goblin recite all that information. 3. This is the style I will be following.

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machadogbc
machadogbcLv15

Is there romance?

Aaden_
Aaden_Lv3

I hope so, and from what i have read, there seems to be. Unless author is just a tease

machadogbc:Is there romance?
Gamer_Tricker
Gamer_TrickerLv4

man you are good keep up the good work🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

solo_leveling_god
solo_leveling_godLv4

ship????

Aaden_:I hope so, and from what i have read, there seems to be. Unless author is just a tease
Aaden_
Aaden_Lv3

so sorry, i honest to god cant remember, since im reading so many harry potter novels, and this is the shortest one. but since i said there was, then there most likely is

solo_leveling_god:ship????
Wesley_Hylry
Wesley_HylryLv14

bro, reply to the comments please is it a harem?

Graviele
GravieleAuthor

no

Wesley_Hylry
Wesley_HylryLv14

oh... sadly.. but thanks for answering

Graviele:no
Green_Lantern_2814
Green_Lantern_2814Lv4

ignore them author-san and do you if they hated your story they wouldnt comment on the latest chapters, they are clearly your fans they just want your and other attention

Rebelcombat_1
Rebelcombat_1Lv4

can there be more chapters a week? and don't worry just follow your pace.

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