awesome chapter

awesome cheaper keep up the hard work

OMG MARVELOUS WORK I CAME UPON THIS NOVEL AND BINGED IT ALL FROM BEGINNING TO NOW ALL IN A DAY CAUSE I COULDN’T STOP!!! Amazing work portraying Luffy its so funny and the one for all fight WOW!!! i especially love the long chapters!

AWESOME!!!!! please keep more chapters coming

AWESOME CHAPTER !!!

DIVINE GENERAL MAHORAGA!!! cause why not make him more op butmake it so he loses control in that form or something

while i love your story it does get irritating sometimes he contradicts himselfs occasionaly he says he wont interfere for fear of changing future events but then he interferes coming up with some excuse like weighing benefits, etc. i just have a question is he always going to have this attitude like when he was a kid ok he was weak and needed to hide and build up his power and now while he isnt the strongest he does stand among the strong and has some political power so why does he still act like this. also him being in the world and his action till now should have changed things maybe not drastically but he should have thought about living his life and not living by a script cause when will he start to live for real . again i love your story is amazing these just my thoughts

i love your work and you said your kinda in a slump but if thats the case just take a break to rest your mind or simple follow the original story and change some parts when inspiration hits or stuff you wished were different in the original story i really love this fic and would hate to see you drop it

AWESOMEE 🔥

ghost rider!!!

OMG HE SHOULD FLIRT/DATE sheldons sister!!!

honestly the main character was hadrian and while i loved the fight scene and ending i just hoped it was more epic on his side like him fight off a horde of dragons alone while defending his men using the deathly hollows he didnt have to kill the night king but done something equally as impressive or even more he could have lost a arm, leg or something to show how hard the fight was and everyone witnessing him slaying hundred of dragons alone

i love either as long as your comfortable and we keep getting more chapters!!! love your work so far keep up the great work

bruhhhh he should have ended things she got manipulated he saw his future self

bruhhhhh why would he tell her i don’t think anything justifies him telling her

thank god i honestly thought him getting hitched so early in the story was a bad idea it hindered baldor story and possible adventure he could take i hope he dont forgive her in the end and he leaves her

keep them chapters coming

amazing another great chapter

AWESOME CHAPTER OMG 😳