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Luizz_Ricardo
Luizz_RicardoLv105mth
2024-07-19 00:48

the author's big flaw is the inconsistency with the protagonist's powers, which never seem to evolve or are not explained, a being that absorbed so much DNA was supposed to have enormous potential, any comic book villain that absorbed so much dnd from different species was continental level. the story was cool but the plot basically keeps going around and around, the MC goes to some world and makes a harem, absorbs some of people's DNA and just.

Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City

akikan40
4.3
408 Chs

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kuokyo
kuokyoLv5

4mth
WALLYZ
WALLYZLv1

Nah, the problem is that he gives away the women he slept with or his love interests to other men, the worst mc, a cuck addicted to netorase.

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Plan_C
Plan_CLv4

wait what? he did that in this book?

WALLYZ:Nah, the problem is that he gives away the women he slept with or his love interests to other men, the worst mc, a cuck addicted to netorase.
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Mr_mysterio
Mr_mysterioLv3

After the DxD story, this is the lowest it has fallen, the protagonist's personality is no longer charismatic, it is insufferable, the interactions only focus on whether she is a woman, the protagonist drools if he is a man , kisses the protagonist's feet, there is no longer any coercion or anything. It is surprising to see how this author remained silent about this.

7mth

PinGoth
PinGothLv4

Trash story, trash mc, trash character development, trash characters in general. MC is a complete idiot who the author makes a "genius" lowering the iq of the rest of the characters, he has it all granted (That orphan start was literally nothing), the women basically just throw themselves at him, just another garbage fanfic that nobody should read. Author has made a lot of fanfics and should have experience but always makes the same errors and even more.

6mth
cult
cultLv4

Honest review. I mean, it's a akikan novel, and he never tried to change his style of writing. MC is actually not a villain this time but just "trying" to be the good guy. Again, sometimes the logic MC uses doesn't make sense, just like any other akikan novel. And I don't doubt that his whole personality will change through out the whole novel several times. At Least this novel isn't as slow paced as the other ones. I do like that he is experiencing with his system and the DNA stuff, that makes it interesting, even more interesting than the other systems. Very bad writing(as per usual if akikan), As it is written like it for 10 year olds. Can't really say much as it's only in it's early chapters. But I hope he doesn't ruin the story like he usually does in his other novels or uses no logic for the characters. It's a entertaining novel to read but also a bad one. [4/30/2024]

7mth
InfinityAndBeyond
InfinityAndBeyondLv5

A new Akikan's fanfic i hope this is good like others. He has the ability to obtain the dna of animals to strengthen himself and can also transform into that animal as he wish. This ability have a good potential, imagine being able to obtain the dna of other races or dna of mythical and magical creatures. Also imagine if he can get a dna of eldritch creatures

7mth
Lord_GRIM
Lord_GRIMLv4

Akikan's I just hope this fanfic will have long chapters and I hope the overall quality of the story in the future remains good, as usual. And congratulations on your new fanfic.😁😁😁😁😁

8mth
00Mark
00MarkLv1

Very annoying reading experience thanks to the childishly petty mc, the girls instantly falling in love with him just by meeting him and the overall disrespect shown by the mc, oh and the novel needs some proof-reading. The dna system is broken but it's also really interesting.

6mth
Daoisth7cZGj
Daoisth7cZGjLv1

it feels like all his characters are the same person just with different names, I feel sorry for those whom he adds to his fanfiction, he completely kills their character, brain and uniqueness

6mth
steam_7042
steam_7042Lv4

The writing is pretty good but all your main characters act like someone that has gotten a lobotomy.

6mth
Ram800
Ram800Lv14

Reveal spoiler

5mth
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