Honest review. I mean, it's a akikan novel, and he never tried to change his style of writing. MC is actually not a villain this time but just "trying" to be the good guy. Again, sometimes the logic MC uses doesn't make sense, just like any other akikan novel. And I don't doubt that his whole personality will change through out the whole novel several times. At Least this novel isn't as slow paced as the other ones. I do like that he is experiencing with his system and the DNA stuff, that makes it interesting, even more interesting than the other systems. Very bad writing(as per usual if akikan), As it is written like it for 10 year olds. Can't really say much as it's only in it's early chapters. But I hope he doesn't ruin the story like he usually does in his other novels or uses no logic for the characters. It's a entertaining novel to read but also a bad one. [4/30/2024]
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correction- for one, he doesnt improve or changes much of anything hence it gets boring and two, i meant two years ago not one.
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Got it ,,,, poinless to root for him if he never bothered to improve his and his work.
i still dont get how he always manages to get top 1 in the ratings, there isnt a single fic of his that isnt anything but mediocre. There are always so many plotholes and unlogical stuff... and yeah like you said the writing💀
IG consistency, his fics aren't the best but he keeps pumping up chapters which is why his fics are on the top.
unknown_daoist:i still dont get how he always manages to get top 1 in the ratings, there isnt a single fic of his that isnt anything but mediocre. There are always so many plotholes and unlogical stuff... and yeah like you said the writing💀image
