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Atalyn_Navia
Atalyn_NaviaLv27mth
2024-05-16 00:40

I've only read 3 chapters and this makes me interested, but what I don't like is the writing of the author doesn't use spacing in each paragraph and almost combines each paragraph together. and to be honest, it made me quite confused when reading, and made me feel lazy about reading some things that I felt weren't important

Giratina in Marvel MCU AU

Spectre_Ouroboros
4.4
39 Chs

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Atalyn_Navia
Atalyn_NaviaLv2

I became curious as to why the author combined long texts into one and did not create gaps for several lines for paragraph

7mth
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Spectre_Ouroboros
Spectre_OuroborosAuthor

To be honest, inexperience. As I kept writing, I started separating more and more. Another point is that when writing, I use my computer, and what seems like a short few sentences or moderate paragraph ends up like a massive one on the phone.

Atalyn_Navia:I became curious as to why the author combined long texts into one and did not create gaps for several lines for paragraph
7mth
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Delight_3462
Delight_3462Lv1

I really enjoy how the author is open to constructive feedback, and how he Branches out to create this new universe.

7mth
1
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Spectre_Ouroboros
Spectre_OuroborosAuthor

As the author it is my right to be shameless in the star review.😅 Honestly though, this is a new experience and adventure for me, so any recommendations, requests, and corrections will be considered seriously.

10mth

Bjorntjuh96
Bjorntjuh96Lv5

A six year old is led into the kitchen for the first time and is given free reign to make a pizza using whatever ingredients they like best. So the child grabs some things it likes and throws them all together willy nilly and shoves it into the oven to let it bake. Fifteen minutes later, out comes a puff pastry bottom, smeared with nutella, topped with a generous amount of pepperoni and to finish it all off, a handfull of skittles. After all who doesn't want to taste the rainbow. That's exactly what we get with this story. It really seems to me like the author started writing and at every turn, whenever they had a 'cool' idea they just added it to the story. So out comes this hodgepodge of individually amazing ingredients that ultimately just don't fit together. There's definitely potential here though, some pretty cool ideas. If the author manages to flesh them out properly, I'm sure it'll be great. But for now, not my cup of tea.

9mth
JaxWolf4
JaxWolf4Lv4

It's usually fanfics like these that get dropped because of how large the Marvel multiverse is, but it is sooo good so far. Please and I mean PLEASE get this story to 50+ chapters.

9mth
Don_shofer
Don_shoferLv4

Wet dreams of otaku….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. ….. It's good enough if you especially like Pokémon.

9mth
TheBoyWhoLikeBooks
TheBoyWhoLikeBooksLv4

The MC personality is cringe and the thoughts of the other beings are also weird

8mth
Swikong
SwikongLv4

I like this book & shows OPNESS in one of the best way. Just hope it reaches it's Grand-Completion with Grandness. Respect to Author 🙏.

9mth
RS_1
RS_1Lv4

pretty good, short fic but pretty good. .

5mth
dragonhalf_Holsey
dragonhalf_HolseyLv4

😭😭😭😭😭🐉🐉🐉🐉🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👍👍👍u updates update update you to good to be a unit

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aiden_rivera
aiden_riveraLv4

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Eston_Hall
Eston_HallLv1

What a refreshingly original concept! I can honestly say I've never come across a more intriguing crossover idea than this. I like how the story develops and how the characterization is both innovative and true to preestablished "cannon". Though the on-page structuring of sentences and paragraphs could use some work (which will imprive with time, no doubt) this series is a joy to read!

7mth
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