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brokensouls
brokensoulsLv11yr
2024-03-10 22:49

After reading 42 chapters, I can say that this story is a hidden gem. Of course, it’s too early to draw conclusions, but this story definitely interested me. If you are interested in reading a story where the main character trains hard to become stronger, then this story is definitely for you. Despite his insane talent, the main character still works much more than others. Author, don't give up this story. I wish you good luck and success in writing this story)

The Strongest Conquest System

Astral_Pandemonium
4.0
533 Chs

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Astral_Pandemonium
Astral_PandemoniumAuthor

Thank you so much 😭 I am glad you like the book. I already have chapters 45-64 done and edited. I will start doing more mass releases when we reach an interesting enough point in the story (Which will be soon) ❤️ Gonna aim for 100+ chapters fully released by the end of March 🫡. Any critiques are appreciated and I am constantly working on improving my writing🥰

1yr
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Astral_Pandemonium
Astral_PandemoniumAuthor

Feel free to join my discord for those extra chapters. My treat for being the first person to give my book a review. chapters are under a Google doc in the 'Quantum Realm' section of the discord channel 👍🏼

1yr
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Astral_Pandemonium
Astral_PandemoniumAuthor

His intelligence is above average. None of the aforementioned things are in my novel. 👌🏼

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Astral_Pandemonium
Astral_PandemoniumAuthor

Yes.

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SWORDGOD_ETERNITY
SWORDGOD_ETERNITYLv4

author how many women are in Mc harem

Astral_Pandemonium:His intelligence is above average. None of the aforementioned things are in my novel. 👌🏼
8mth
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T3EGREEDYTREE
T3EGREEDYTREELv3

DO more! release more!, and I hope this novel rival The big three SL,LOTM,RI!!

Astral_Pandemonium:Thank you so much 😭 I am glad you like the book. I already have chapters 45-64 done and edited. I will start doing more mass releases when we reach an interesting enough point in the story (Which will be soon) ❤️ Gonna aim for 100+ chapters fully released by the end of March 🫡. Any critiques are appreciated and I am constantly working on improving my writing🥰
7mth
Eternal_Shu
Eternal_ShuLv13

hey author is this book completed ??

Astral_Pandemonium:Thank you so much 😭 I am glad you like the book. I already have chapters 45-64 done and edited. I will start doing more mass releases when we reach an interesting enough point in the story (Which will be soon) ❤️ Gonna aim for 100+ chapters fully released by the end of March 🫡. Any critiques are appreciated and I am constantly working on improving my writing🥰
7mth
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Eternal_Shu
Eternal_ShuLv13

coz it's showing it's completed I hope it's not coz I enjoying this novel

Astral_Pandemonium:Thank you so much 😭 I am glad you like the book. I already have chapters 45-64 done and edited. I will start doing more mass releases when we reach an interesting enough point in the story (Which will be soon) ❤️ Gonna aim for 100+ chapters fully released by the end of March 🫡. Any critiques are appreciated and I am constantly working on improving my writing🥰
7mth
DaoistjQtMkq
DaoistjQtMkqLv3

Is mc villainous?

6mth
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cloud_nine9
cloud_nine9Lv2

hey you guys check out blessed visor

4mth
thinkforonceucunt
thinkforonceucuntLv3

is there a new discord link?

Astral_Pandemonium:Thank you so much 😭 I am glad you like the book. I already have chapters 45-64 done and edited. I will start doing more mass releases when we reach an interesting enough point in the story (Which will be soon) ❤️ Gonna aim for 100+ chapters fully released by the end of March 🫡. Any critiques are appreciated and I am constantly working on improving my writing🥰
3mth
Astral_Pandemonium
Astral_PandemoniumAuthor

I have 2 in my bio. They should both work

thinkforonceucunt:is there a new discord link?
3mth
DaoisteCmUpa
DaoisteCmUpaLv4

why rush it man

Astral_Pandemonium:Thank you so much 😭 I am glad you like the book. I already have chapters 45-64 done and edited. I will start doing more mass releases when we reach an interesting enough point in the story (Which will be soon) ❤️ Gonna aim for 100+ chapters fully released by the end of March 🫡. Any critiques are appreciated and I am constantly working on improving my writing🥰
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The novel is well-written, although there are a couple of moments where you might notice that the author is not an experienced writer, but these moments are few and far between. You can also feel that the author is continuously improving and really cares for his book in the forms like re-editing old chapters or correcting grammar mistakes. I can recommend the novel to both new and seasoned novel readers alike. This is not a biased review......I swear [img=angry]

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this novel had potential till the first potential "love interest" entered the picture. This is where the novels start going downhill for me. None of these women ever act like actual people. it's so jarring. of course, that was just the deal breaker for me. actually, in all these 20 chapters I've read, the only somewhat "normal" character is the goblin king, and I'm assuming that's just because we've only had one scene with him in it, up to this point.

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KinginRed
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Will the MC ever meet his parent and if he did which chapter is it

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author is this book and your other book connected? I hope not as mc in the other book can be considered weaker as he has not achieved the secret realms in the stages of cultivation

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