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2024-04-05 00:22

The novel is well-written, although there are a couple of moments where you might notice that the author is not an experienced writer, but these moments are few and far between. You can also feel that the author is continuously improving and really cares for his book in the forms like re-editing old chapters or correcting grammar mistakes. I can recommend the novel to both new and seasoned novel readers alike. This is not a biased review......I swear [img=angry]

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Relatively decent for the most part, especially in regard to how well the author delivers on the aspect of the MC being OP to a ridiculous extent I’m positively a fan of. First dozen chapters or so the MC focuses solely on cultivating with not much else going on, which I have absolutely no problem with. My main gripe with this novel started with the introduction of romance. I for one am not against romance in general, and in fact enjoy the genre, but the way the way it’s introduced is entirely too sudden and forced. I know of love at first sight, but within the span of a chapter the first two introduced women instantly fall for the MC to the extent of obsessiveness. That’s entirely unnatural no matter how you look at it. Not to mention how many chapters were spent on this all of a sudden blossoming love between the MC and the second introduced heroine. It was so excessive that it was a bit uncomfortable reading those chapters. I continued reading on despite this though as I enjoy the aspect of the MC growing stronger and breaking all existing norms. My patience waned however when the MC intrudes upon a secret dimension and acquires a book granting him a highly coveted method of cultivation. There he meets two gods, with conversation spanning 20 CHAPTERS! I of course won’t chalk off the conversation as being unnecessary, but that many chapters spent on a single conversation is ridiculous. Not to mention one of these said gods is a woman disguised as a male, and what do you know, this god that looked down on the MC for being a weak mortal ant initially already shows signs of having feelings for the MC… I know that this novel supposedly ramps up after chapter 100, but my patience has run out. Would still recommend, but definitely with lower expectations.

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