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PokemonJoker
PokemonJokerLv310mth
2024-03-12 02:29

I mean there are so many plotholes and parts that don’t make sense. Such as saying Ginny was not raised in the magical world so her body is not attuned to magic. The idea is brillaint but the execution leaves a bad taste in your mouth. I know the author is translating this and has admitted to changing things but I mean come on change it up a little more. I wish this was good and that is the most frustrating part.

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Had missed that line, now edited, thx for pointing out!

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