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HornyFBI
HornyFBIAuthor1yr
2024-03-02 01:43

Hey Guys! This is my review- It's a good story, not great, and not too bad either. I don't think it deserves 5 stars because it has flaws. But I love reading it while relaxing.

I became Voldemort

HornyFBI
4.6
301 Chs

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_Solomon_
_Solomon_Lv13

hey man,dk if you've read all the chapters so far but imo this book is not worth translating as the further you go the more idiotic this book gets... the beginning was decent but ltr on...

1yr
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Arion_Sturmklinge
Arion_SturmklingeLv2

Chould you post the raw link, it seems that i am unable to find it

_Solomon_:hey man,dk if you've read all the chapters so far but imo this book is not worth translating as the further you go the more idiotic this book gets... the beginning was decent but ltr on...
1yr
Jokers_Theif_2023
Jokers_Theif_2023Lv12

You got me here for the villain tag then changed it to antihero

1yr
4
DarkKnight32
DarkKnight32Lv6

Hey author what chapter does mc get his body back

1yr
2
HornyFBI
HornyFBIAuthor

Chapter 78

DarkKnight32:Hey author what chapter does mc get his body back
10mth
HornyFBI
HornyFBIAuthor

Haah~ I'm changing the story after ch 80! and will end the story near ch 100.

_Solomon_:hey man,dk if you've read all the chapters so far but imo this book is not worth translating as the further you go the more idiotic this book gets... the beginning was decent but ltr on...
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_Solomon_
_Solomon_Lv13

I'm looking forward to it then

HornyFBI:Haah~ I'm changing the story after ch 80! and will end the story near ch 100.
10mth
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HornyFBI
HornyFBIAuthor

I think I lied, I'm changing but ain't gonna end it at ch 100 ☻

_Solomon_:I'm looking forward to it then
10mth
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Salazarson
SalazarsonLv1

You can write a new arc with your own theme and story. (I'm starting to read now with the hype of the comments)

HornyFBI:I think I lied, I'm changing but ain't gonna end it at ch 100 ☻
10mth
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HornyFBI
HornyFBIAuthor

I just edited the parts where the story would look stupid. It's basically the same with a lower chance of readers dropping it lol

Salazarson:You can write a new arc with your own theme and story. (I'm starting to read now with the hype of the comments)
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_Solomon_
_Solomon_Lv13

🥲

HornyFBI:I think I lied, I'm changing but ain't gonna end it at ch 100 ☻
10mth
solo_leveling_god
solo_leveling_godLv4

ship????

HornyFBI:I just edited the parts where the story would look stupid. It's basically the same with a lower chance of readers dropping it lol
10mth
NeetMc
NeetMcLv5

I read the raw and if you are making a well deserved ending I am looking forward to it.

9mth
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ahmedIprahim
ahmedIprahimLv1

هل يمكنك أن تعطيني الرابط الروايه للاصليه

NeetMc:I read the raw and if you are making a well deserved ending I am looking forward to it.
7mth
RegalObscure
RegalObscureLv4

Okay 🤣🤣🤣. What's up with name?

2mth
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IA_Extra13
IA_Extra13Lv4

Can you tell me if it is Harem if there is romance (please no harem)

HornyFBI:I just edited the parts where the story would look stupid. It's basically the same with a lower chance of readers dropping it lol
2mth
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MilkLover
MilkLoverLv4

God! You finally decided to upload this! I was reading its MTL version and searched a lot but no one was doing a decent job of translating even the 1st chapter. But your translation is impressive! So Fking Good!

1yr

GenYase
GenYaseLv5

Writing Quality: Few mistakes here and there with translation. Stability of updates: Fast Story Development: Trash, literally author holding to the main storyline too much, i think a few decades of communism can really kill any imagination within a person Character Design: Trash, Ginny and other people (they are unimportant just like Ginny) are plain but they do realise something is wrong with Ginny suprise suprise. MC is trash who clings to main storyline too much WB: already set in motion.

1yr
KuNaLsAmA
KuNaLsAmALv4

[img=faceslap]Ótimo trabalho e a tradução é muito boa [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Sleeping_dragon26
Sleeping_dragon26Lv15

More Capters please

1yr
T0JIzenIn
T0JIzenInLv1

At first, this was not what I was expecting before reading. Now I'm addicted to it and I don't know why, I joined WN a long time ago (some months IDK) and have read HP fics - better ones- yet given a review, this on the other hand is not good but the writing is addictive and its almost have become my guilty pleasure. Alas, I'm writing a review and giving it a 5 stars so that it doesn't gets dropped.

9mth
Dragonel23
Dragonel23Lv4

It's really good to read while you are taking a break from work. No MC cringe interactions with people and no forced comedy👍💯

1yr
PokemonJoker
PokemonJokerLv3

I mean there are so many plotholes and parts that don’t make sense. Such as saying Ginny was not raised in the magical world so her body is not attuned to magic. The idea is brillaint but the execution leaves a bad taste in your mouth. I know the author is translating this and has admitted to changing things but I mean come on change it up a little more. I wish this was good and that is the most frustrating part.

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CouchPotatoDandy
CouchPotatoDandyLv5

The MC is stuck in Tom Riddle diary and instead of doing everything he can to get out as soon as possible and reincarnate, he just follow the plot of the Harry Potter second book... He also makes very stupid decisions. Why do that? I believe it's because the author doesn't have any originality and just follow along the second book Chamber of Secrets plot... The only redeeming quality of this fanfic is that the translation is excellent without any mistakes that I could spot.

9mth
Captain69
Captain69Lv1

Reveal spoiler

1yr
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