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Helia_King
Helia_KingLv41yr
2024-03-07 05:37

You pretty much ruined your ff when you made ch 11 but I’ll keep reading to see if it gets better but I recommend not making your mc op if your going to have some bs like that happen again.

MHA : Adaptation

RenegadeJack
4.3
67 Chs

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Helia_King
Helia_KingLv4

You’ll be fine if you skip ch 11 I guess

1yr
1
Helia_King
Helia_KingLv4

Though some stuff should obviously be changed as there is no reason to stick to the original plot of the anime

Helia_King:You’ll be fine if you skip ch 11 I guess
1yr
2
Helia_King
Helia_KingLv4

I’m on ch 21 and it’s gotten better

1yr
2
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

What happened in chapter 11?

1yr
1
Helia_King
Helia_KingLv4

He somehow got kidnapped which should be impossible but the author literally just ignored all his quirks pluses some other bs that I forgot since I haven’t touched this ff in a while

FinnsRevenge:What happened in chapter 11?
1yr
13
DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Then I am not bothering since the author is an idiot, nerfed the MC, or made the MC into a moron lol sooooo no chance will I waste my time resdibg trash like this

Helia_King:He somehow got kidnapped which should be impossible but the author literally just ignored all his quirks pluses some other bs that I forgot since I haven’t touched this ff in a while
11mth
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Very good story, a little rushed maybe and I think the synopsis doesn't really correlate to the actual story, he isn't shunned or feared at all (and that's good tbh). Good work !

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La idea del fanfic es muy buena, pero creo que falla en que es muy apresurado todo, hubo ocasiones en que tuve que leer varias veces para comprender, me da la impresión de que el autor escribía para si mismo y no pensaba desde la perspectiva del lector, creo que una reescritura le vendría bien.

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