So far I like it, honestly, in my opinion, even though you haven't shown greatness in creating suspenseful plots, you are very good at creating dialogue between characters... Everything feels deep, it's very rare to see a fanfic story with good dialogue like this, most fanfics just will play with story plots where they have very little good dialogue, in fact they tend to be bad... but your fanfic is very good... Tsunade's feelings are also very clear, Tsunade is not like a teenager who will blush easily at the MC, unlike most fanfics. .. Honestly, I really like this novel because I've been looking for a fanfic with the character Tsunade as the only love interest for a long time and finally I found it..
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