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Di_SciplineLv41yr
2024-02-23 14:19

First of all, the idea is unique and is executed very well. The writing is great and simple. I like the world building and the slight mystery that was added. Mc is morally strong, the character interaction feels really good. Overall i would say, the fanfic has great potential and i personally like the story progression. Can't wait to read the next chapter 😁👍

Martial Grandmaster in Naruto World

readerbecamewriter
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53 Chs

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readerbecamewriter
readerbecamewriterAuthor

My shameful review, from the very author of this fanfic. So, I like to write this. Its fun. That's it. Now i'll be talking about what this fanfic is about: What if a Martial Grandmaster of a martial arts society in ancient china suddenly went to Naruto World? What is the difference between Qi and Chakra? And how to use both to become stronger? The heroine is Tsunade, best girl. Her story is so sad, and I thought: "I want her to be happy", and that's what I aim for. No harem, fellas. Honestly, of all woman in Naruto, Tsunade is the best. Story, personality, strenght, physical appearance, so what more do you want? She's enough. Yujin, the MC, has his own story. And thats it, I hope you like it.

1yr

CornyChiWAH
CornyChiWAHLv14

Pretty solid fanfiction, I haven't seen in a while fanfiction that doesn't make me want to drop after -50 chapter and got me hooked for more. The romance is slow which is good and not rushed, the story quoting from the author "focused on romance and slice of life." which is something that I like knowing how many action packed Naruto fanfiction till today. Not much grammatical or basic writing mistakes if not at all which means the fanfiction is very readable. Overall, I definitely recommend anyone to try reading this fanfiction.👍🏻 (PS: you probably notice who's going to be the Waifu looking at the poster, Another thing that make this fanfiction great XD)

1yr
MARLENE_ANGEL
MARLENE_ANGELLv1

TRUTH NO BS>I LOVE THIS NOVEL THAT CENTERS AROUND MINE HOT MAMA TSUNADE.I LOVE TSUNADE THE BEST WOMAN IN THE NARUTO UNIVERSE SECOND TO KAGUYA. THIS NOVEL IS AWESOME STORY TO TELL AND YOU NEED TO READ OR BE MIND-BLOW BY IT..I LOVE THE CHEMISTRY BETWEEN THE CHARACTERS WELL DONE AUTHOR ..YOU DESERT MIEN 7 STARS..YUMMY NOVEL.

1yr
ProfaneImmortal
ProfaneImmortalLv14

As if Ch. 27 : The plot is good. The characters are fleshed out well. World building is good and logic flows well. At no point does the fic seem absurd. Kudos to the author for a good fic. Hope you continue writing.

1yr
Sword_1mmortal
Sword_1mmortalLv14

Dang, When Qi meets Chakra. This concept is extremely unique and is just right up my alley. I've already been a fan of Martial arts manhwa's and novels and Naruto. Brief summary is a Martial Grandmaster, a practitioner of Qi, gets transported or time travelled into the era of Chakra and Ninjas and meets Tsunade before having a chill life at the Leaf. Slice of Life elements and tons of lore about Martial Artists and Qi sprinkled into the story.

1yr
SaintArgus
SaintArgusLv14

a pleasant read, from a guy from a murim world, it will be nice to see how yujin changes in the ninja world................................................

1yr
Lord_Hastur
Lord_HasturLv5

The romance in this FanFiction is awesome. The MC is a mature character I am sure you will like him.

1yr
jajanken
jajankenLv5

which fanfic did you get your inspiration from ?? can you give us the original link or raw link if MTL.

1yr
CRUZ_ANT
CRUZ_ANTLv4

the best read I've found since like forever, a concept i really love at the same time with romance, that j-just awesome!!

1yr
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