Very well written. Excellent work incorporating existing lore. This work has earned these stars.
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Hello! Shameless self-review as per the standard. This Fanfic is about someone getting abducted and turned into a super weapon with roughly the Pokémon Hoopa's abilities and appearance, but here he is, one of the Aeldari Gods. It starts in the far past of Warhammer 40k, in the War in Heaven, but there would be time skips and not hundreds of chapters on this event. If you have questions, feel free to ask.
The fact that this is about one of my favorite Pokemon and one of my favorite monster types. Anything with Djinn like property is a instant support from me.
It's Warhammer 40k with Hoopa as a Creation of the Old Ones, I dont need to think hard on giving this fic 5 Stars even tho it only has 5 chapter now
this is one of the few decent Warhammer fanfics that don't use like 2/3 of the chapter to explain how one thing is done, of course you need the explanation and background information for those who don't know the lore, but you do it by simplifying that into about a third or half the chapter which is pretty good considering the lore of Warhammer
He’s basically a slave to the old ones till chapter 23 then he became a genie to and then will become a slave again. At the beginning the writing quality is okay, when asked if he could use some type of app to help improve his grammar, he said no that the reason why it was bad was cuz there character was human so he would not think with perfect grammar. I said that stupid as we the readers should expect the right level of grammar and that the first couple of chapters need to bring the viewer in, and when you say no to constructive criticism it sends bad signals. Writing stability is okay, from last I read he posted 4 days ago witch is alright not the best where it’s one every day or every second day but I don’t know the specific time between the chapters The story development is again alright a very good concept and I love it as hoopa’s design is very cool but it could be a bit better. With him not being a slave(he has some freedom but can be controlled by the old ones and the whole point in the story was for him to get his freedom but when he did he is now a trapped genie). Like I said love the design of the character here so that’s really good. Not much to say, just that it’s using the old necron lore not the modern one. I like the book somewhat but it could be better, the aurther likes to make long monologues and it can get annoying a bit.
Another amazing start to (what I hope will be) another amazing fanfiction! Keep up the awesome work!
I don't know what to say about this other than awesome and that i really wish I could read more right now as the more i read the greater i feel compelled to read further, only to be left torn waiting an entire week for single update. How sinister and cruel.
I saw warhammer. I got Warhammer . Warhammer/10
keep it up i love this book i cant say its my favorite warhammer fanfic but it's definitely in my top 3. and the updates aren't months apart.
its bip boop what can i say, its short in chaps atm but its pure gas already
My Taboo One shots. Harry accidentally discovers Lily engaged in masturbation, leaving both of them surprised and unsure how to handle the unexpected situation. Lemons/Smut. Harry/Lily.
This is story of lonely and silent female black OOP soldier who died savings a child during a mission and got reincarnated by gods with some wish in harry potter in which she is the daughter of Professor Snape and Lily Evan's ----I DID NOT READ HARRY POTTER AND CHAPTERS ARE ACCORDING TO KNOWLEDGE WHICH I CAN GET, I HAVE TRIED TO FOLLOW ORIGINAL STORY---
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What if when a reincarnator has experienced most of life plans on settling down in the world of remnant and takes Ruby as his adopted daughter? The immortal monarch known by everyone in his world as the Azure immortal was the strongest known cultivator of the myriads races. Many tales of him were told to children, inspiring many to become the best they can in life. He had many friends and many lovers but never had a child. As a rouge immortal, he roamed the nine realms by himself, helping those in need and righting wrongs through the lands. But what people knew not of him, was that the Azure immortal was a reincarnator whom reincarnated from a planet known as earth. For eons he lived life to the fullest and saw the world as he would be to his heart. Neither evil or good, the Azure immortal travelled many realms and universes doing all that he wanted and needed. But after so long, he has finally grown weary of his travels and plans on settling down in one of the universes he found to be a good place to settle. In the world of remnant. However when exiting dimensional travel, he stumbles upon a dying woman known as Summer Rose in a remote alley. In her embrace was a silver eyed child. This child was Ruby Rose when she was 3. "A cruel world, a cruel life that is the truth of the universe but through our own, can we live a wholesome life. A child that is innocent should not be thrown into such a world at a young age. I shall take you in as my own and as of today your name shall be Kiana Rose. Eyes representing the Moon and Rose a name given by your mother." This is a story of how a reincarnator adopts Ruby as his own daughter. Note all arts and works are not mine with the exception of many things inside.
A book of stories to whisk you away from the hardships we face on a daily basis
There’s a new girl in school, and she caught Park Jimin’s eye. Want to know what’s in store for them? Keep reading and I hope you enjoy this!! Please follow me on Instagram @thenewkouseiarima for updates on any novels I’m working on ;)
They say Love is a beautiful moment that happens in your life, You become a new person when you fall in love ~~~But sometimes it's not necessary that the love of your life will be always successful ..... "I never loved you~~~" "I Hate you with all my heart ..." "Am sorry " "Never come infront of me ,I don't know what I will do " .. Once you break someones trust you cannot build it up ,and once you broke someones heart it cannot be joined back again ...Are you ready to Enjoy this Mysterious Hateful Love of Mine ? The story is based on author's imagination The characters in this book has nothing to do with real life everything is fictional . copyright belongs to Ddevil.S