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Good idea, but the story is very poorly written. The dialogue sometimes stops making the slightest sense, the same with the changes that are made in scenes.

Really happy to see ypu coming back. This history os awespme

I really liked how is advancing. No really sure about how blaise is going to work in the story, it feals a little to much but. I goint to follow the history. Thanks for the work

To many POV make the history hard to follow and a little boring. The start is good but i would love more focus on the MC. Besive the score i belive that could be a great history

Hi, first thanks for the fic, is maybe the best that a i have ever read. Really really good i give stones because if poor jajajjajaj i hope that you end the history dont take bad reviews to heart, not many people takes the time to do a whole fic and even less do it so well, that takes a lot work. Big fan

try waiting it get better around the 60 ch

This is really good, i saw a lot of complaing about the first chapters being slow a and boring I have to agree but it also make a lot of sense to explain how the MC act. It was decen until the 60ch went became realllllyyyy goodddddddd. thanks author

no presure jajajajajajaj

i hate the novel because is to slow then i calm myself and realice that i just want more chapters, and is so f good that what i hate is that i cant read more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

this novel is reallyy fucking gooddd and so diferent from the normal cultivator novel. the psicolgical aspec give a really nice drama and you can see how the war afect the characrer i loveddd