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Doom_Writer
Doom_WriterLv11yr
2024-03-02 21:05

Approve.The first chapter is extra exciting and intriguing, followed by the awakening of the Mc and his unique skills. So far I didn't find problems in writing quality. That is all! Please upload more chapters 🙏.

Gene Evolution: Monster Simulator

Death_Simulation
4.0
82 Chs

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Death_Simulation
Death_SimulationAuthor

The author here. Thoughts? Do tell me what you think in the reviews. Enjoy the book. This is for WSA, so I would appreciate power stones once that opens up. Have fun guys. Comment if you have any questions.

1yr

Death_Simulation
Death_SimulationAuthor

Thank you for giving my book a read, I won’t go to much into detail but if you have any questions before diving in just let me know!

1yr
Yeng_Sensei
Yeng_SenseiLv5

what is with the book cover? xD dude got three hand or is it supposed to be a skill?

1yr
Angry_Reviewer
Angry_ReviewerLv13

unintelligible gibberish, don't know if it is because the translator is incompetent or the writer is incompetent but it amounts to the same thing, this is unreadable nonsense.

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SunMedic
SunMedicLv15

Reveal spoiler

9mth
Nathan_Huyghe
Nathan_HuygheLv15

there are mistakes in all chapters the author confuses the name of the characters and the story doesn't make any sense

10mth
Solor1
Solor1Lv3

To many POV make the history hard to follow and a little boring. The start is good but i would love more focus on the MC. Besive the score i belive that could be a great history

10mth
CrazyNoahV
CrazyNoahVLv15

I think this would be a good novel if I could actually read it without having to pause and comprehend what the author was trying to say. I’m guessing the authors first language isn’t English which good job I only know English but if you want a more coherent read for native English speakers try downloading grammerly.

11mth
God_Knight
God_KnightLv1

I don’t care what other may say about this story if what they are saying is bad because I am deeply interested in it.

1yr
andrewashcaleb
andrewashcalebLv5

The beginning felt rushed and the choices the MC made don’t make sense. The story within the first 5 chapters is very similar to the story super god gene. Even used the situation were the MC hits a transformed girl that leads to several issues for the MC.

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