The novel has an intriguing premise and raises many interesting questions. The use of multiple descriptors for the protagonist adds depth to their character. However, the writing could benefit from more concise and flowing sentences. Additionally, more description and world-building could enhance the immersive experience for the reader. Overall, the concept has potential and with some polishing, could make for a gripping and thought-provoking story.

The novel kicks off with an engaging premise, skillfully fleshing out the protagonist with a range of descriptive elements that lend considerable depth to their character. This character stands out from the conventional archetypes found in many other stories, offering a refreshing divergence. The concept of an MMORPG where altering one's body shape affects stats introduces an intriguing mechanic. However, the introduction leans heavily on exposition, delineating the protagonist's traits without the dynamism of action. Weaving in more active scenarios could better serve to draw readers into the story's world right from the start.

Dang it, this really kicks in... I like the story progression so far as well as the main lead. Character design, world background, and story development have 5 stars. Some minor mistakes here and there but that can be fixed. Overall, good story~

So far I’m loving the story, I really like the design of the male lead character and the descriptions behind him they make him feel real. Overall I enjoyed the story but wish that it had a little more world development.

I really enjoy reading this and add them on my reading list. I got a lot of new information from this novel and Albinus_istamar did very good reference research. Keep writing Budy!

so i do read your story it's addictive, cause the progression is amasing the mc is awesome the writting is also good and the plot man i loved the plot. and the only doubt left is why didn't your series got contracted but whatever the series must get contracted that my opinion.

I have become a fan. Perhaps because the story has a futuristic Earth setting? It was like watching a movie! The writing style is super mature. The way the story is developing with internal monologue and conversations with a character, it feels like a game itself. The description of the Spanish language from a foreigner gives the vibe that a veteran writer is at work! There is a definite mystery and the writer is setting the initial stage for it. Amazing work. I would highly recommend this. I pray for its success! Cheers!

I absolutely adored the use of words and expressions in this piece.the style of narration employed in this piece was truly beautiful. The author's ability to paint vivid imagery with their words transported me to another world.

I am not familiar with this type of novel but I can give my honest opinion about other things .The writing style is good but it can be more elevated by this tip i will give you : make the paragraphs shorter so that readers don't get bored and pressured by the length of it . The plot is interesting as well as the MC . I hope that our dear author will shape the story nicely and give an exciting ride till the end ! Keep up the good work !

Really enjoyed Reading this the lead is well described and the background is well written . I added it to my reading list.