Albinus_istamar

Fixed, i'm sorry by this mistake, i don't know why but the ortographic corrector that i use, sometimes chages the sex of MC. I you see some other mistakes please let me know and i wil fix it asap

A good novel with an interesting writing style. You can quickly identify each character's role in the protagonist's world. I'm intrigued to see how it will continue.

Good first chapters. I'm going to give the plot a chance. I like to start with a character from a young age. Don't rush, dear author and colleague, to develop the character. I hope this project goes well for you.

There is one thing I appreciate above all others when I read a novel, it is the courage of the author to break away from the established canon and follow his instinct. It is easy to fall into the clichés of an impressive prologue, only to then fall into a continuous disappointment until the novel begins to gain pace, however, starting from the first person point of view which is quite refreshing, to a beginning in which the brushstrokes are light, creating more questions than answers, generates good expectations to continue reading the novel. Keep going along this path, the novel looks good.

tomorrow i Will do yours

This is not just another shameless review of the author, let's say it's a wake-up call, continuing to write a story that seems to be disliked given the data that has been collected during this first month and a half of life is difficult, so without being the least bit ashamed I'm going to ask you: should I continue the story or should we send it to the drawer of novels that can't be continued?

Unfortunately, he didn't kill anyone, he vanished so that his secrets wouldn't be discovered.

yes sorry i hace uploaded the untranslated chapter sorry

Hi mate, thank you so much for your support, if i win some FP for readers, i will get you one :)

thank you mate