The novel kicks off with an engaging premise, skillfully fleshing out the protagonist with a range of descriptive elements that lend considerable depth to their character. This character stands out from the conventional archetypes found in many other stories, offering a refreshing divergence. The concept of an MMORPG where altering one's body shape affects stats introduces an intriguing mechanic. However, the introduction leans heavily on exposition, delineating the protagonist's traits without the dynamism of action. Weaving in more active scenarios could better serve to draw readers into the story's world right from the start.
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Thank you very much for your review. I am aware of the problem of the lack of action in the first chapters, my problem is that in the end I had to make that small sacrifice for the good of the story, introducing flashbacks or reflections on the past afterwards broke certain climatic moments. I also promise to take the story a little more dynamically in the following chapters. A cordial greeting
