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fernaaga_ag
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2024-12-31 13:08

More I need more more more The other fick is also very good but I hope this one is not abandoned[img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket]

Avatar: Third Son of The Fire Lord

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4.3
87 Chs

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David_Black120
David_Black120Lv4

I like the concept of the novel, but it comes with one really big flaw. the mc acts nothing like a dragon should. the mc is way to soft, childish, and emotional. lacks the pride and arrogance you would think a dragon would have. the mc is royalty among dragons. He should be out fighting, asserting his dominance over the world. instead, he adopts a child and plays daddy. very disappointing

1yr

FujiwaraNoMokou
FujiwaraNoMokouLv4

It is honestly confusing. Not the Plot, but the way the Author writes. When it comes to the Dialogue "this" is better than -this- IMO

1yr
SalveYing
SalveYingLv11

I just finished reading the first 15 chapters. I love the character and enjoy their interactions with Azula, Ozai, and the world in general. I'm fascinated by how their actions and powers are changing the world. I hope you continue with this wonderful fanfic.

1yr
Alex_Cech
Alex_CechLv10

the translation is not good but thats a problem with all chineses novel translations. pronouns are thrown at the wall and whatever sticks sticks. the one thing i would recommend to anyone trying to translate a chinses novel is to just take the original run it through chat gpt to translate then, turn that into the bones of the novel and write the rest yourself. chinese novels seem to to be the oil to english speakers water, they dont mix. the way characters behave talk and the ideas about people and the world tend to be really difficult and often confusing for english speakers/ readers so my recommendation for any chinese novel translator is to either stop or take the idea and write their own version. just like the chinsese do to other pieces of media

7mth
Cosmic
CosmicLv15

its a translation. doesn't use "parenthesis" and is written in first person instead of third person

6mth
Marcia_05
Marcia_05Lv12

Es algo nuevo, brillante y acogedor, la forma en que tomas los puntos espirituales del mundo Avatar y los usas de tal forma que se acomoden a la historia es excelente. Lastima que no tiene el reconocimiento que merece. Sin embargo, por mi parte seguiré apoyando tu obra.

11mth
Gd_Sys
Gd_SysLv4

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

1yr
fernaaga_ag
fernaaga_agLv2

I need more chapters I need more chapters I need more chapters I need more chapters I need more chapters I need more chapters I need more chapters I need more chapters I need more chapters I need more chapters I need more chapters

2mth
Javlon_Qurbonov
Javlon_QurbonovLv1

Прекрасный фанфик очень затягивает в себя сюжетом характерами персонажей и достаточной реалистичностой которое придает шарм особенный шарм[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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