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ApoloJackson
ApoloJacksonLv11yr
2024-03-19 18:10

The biggest problem with this story is the MC. 10 years of training, 10 years, and he remains the same empty, hollow shell. And it's not a matter of waiting for chapters, it's logic. If you wanted to keep the MC like a potato and develop it little by little, there would be no point in doing this training during this time. It's torturous to read how he walks and acts even though he's that age, that training, and his "ability."

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ApoloJackson
ApoloJacksonLv1

And it also has the romance, Ecchi and harem tags... Really? This will only happen if you do like Oda and pile up about 1k chapters. At this point it is easier for Luffy to form a harem and for Issei to stop liking women.

Sesbian_Lex
Sesbian_LexLv3

Chopper also has a better chance of getting his harem as a woman from the mink tribe 😆

ApoloJackson:And it also has the romance, Ecchi and harem tags... Really? This will only happen if you do like Oda and pile up about 1k chapters. At this point it is easier for Luffy to form a harem and for Issei to stop liking women.
PRIMORDIAL_09
PRIMORDIAL_09Lv4

it will be more like everyone : marry me! mc: nods! 😂

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