The biggest problem with this story is the MC. 10 years of training, 10 years, and he remains the same empty, hollow shell. And it's not a matter of waiting for chapters, it's logic. If you wanted to keep the MC like a potato and develop it little by little, there would be no point in doing this training during this time. It's torturous to read how he walks and acts even though he's that age, that training, and his "ability."

Your novel is weird. It's like telling a story of a mother who doesn't like hurting living beings. In the world of One Piece, having such a nature is not good, you stupid writer. A bad novel with other silly MC traits.

A clear example of how to ruin a fanfiction in 2 chapters, amazing[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

An author's recommendation: dedicate more time to this fic that can still be saved than to the others because the protagonist of this story seems more like a secondary character than the Mc [img=fp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

There's not much to say about this fic, it's very bad, a very slow story and so out of logic, a boring, empty and clunky protagonist that the only thing I manage to awaken in me is an incredible boredom I don't understand how anyone can like a protagonist who doesn't show any emotion and all he does is nod and act like a fool

A naïve, boring, silly and weak protagonist, if he hadn't had that 10-year training with the Dark King, the story that the author wants to interpret would be more believable, but unfortunately it's not like that [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

This fan fic is not worth wasting your time. This is prolly gonna be dropped soon and author is not consistent at all. The character design is good but doesn't suit the theme at all.

In the last few chapters, the supposed 10-year training with the Dark King himself went to waste [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Its awful like really bad its not consistant mc too nice even after being sold by his dad and being trained by one of the strongest characters author makes him seem strong in the summary but after 10 years of training which luffy only took 2 was able to learn conquerro. and author made him have immense talen more than luffy just don't read it i'll say...