ApoloJackson

Well, it was actually nice to follow the story so far, but after this forced arc I'm leaving. Good luck to whoever stays, but after all this I expected a bit of self-esteem from the protagonist, but even in that he's useless, just like the author forcing this clueless plot for the sake of his harem.

Great author, thank you! As for the character, I understand who it is, I believe, just the fact that it is not 100% original is already better for me. As I said, nothing against your work, just my own personal taste. I appreciate the answer, I will take another look until this chapter and see if I continue following. Hugs and see you later

Ty Man, Brazil is here kkkkkkkk

Ty Man, good job

Feeling of maturity, and I liked the logic of the city and the blank canvas. Real Madrid is problematic for new players without an established career.

probably the worst chapter in the whole story...

Thanks

I'm so tense, bro, I don't even have anything to say to you. I just wish you good luck, because unfortunately it's not easy for anyone lol

Not even Jesus pleased everyone, man. If that's what you expect when you publish your story, I'm sorry to discourage you - it all depends on whether or not you're willing to separate what's constructive and what's not, but that's up to you, because it doesn't mean it's easy. As for the story, I liked it overall and I liked the romance (although I don't agree with this Blanc, I thought she was too experienced for a new guy - and yes, I know about real life and blah blah, it doesn't mean I like it). But despite that, I didn't say anything because I like how the interactions between them were and the games in general. As for the new romantic interest, I think that if it's going to create drama with the agenda issue, it's better not to include the romance at all (I'm a fan of romance but I've had enough drama in my life). Finally, I don't know if this was helpful or not, they're just my thoughts while I'm on my lunch break. Hugs, author, all the best and see you soon.

Nice man