The story is good, interesting, the best thing is that from the first chapter you have elements to know what the background is or at least what type of novel and character it is going to be, you don't leave the reader lost for chapters and chapters and that is a lot of thank. Well written, and with a good argument or so it seems. I'll keep reading to see how the story ends.

Your writing is easy to read and flows very smoothly. The action scenes are definitely a huge strength as it felt very impactful. While the premise and genre are quite common, your decision to take things slow might result a well polished story. I loved the pacing in the first few chapters. Some advice from me would be attempt a more show don't tell approach. This could be through the thoughts of the MC, or dialogue since omnipotent narrator kills the sense of immersion. Also, revisiting your chapters after you're done writing them a few hours to a day later will help you spot mistakes easily. Overall, a pleasant read and keep posting

"Apex World: Reincarnation of the Exalted Legion" is a novel that strikes a compelling balance between meticulous world-building, a gripping plot, and character development that keeps readers on their toes. Here's a distilled essence of what makes this book a standout: The novel's world is richly drawn, with magic, adventure, and a level of detail that immerses readers into its unique setting from the start. The journey of a reincarnated exiled prince in a realm dominated by the formidable Exalted Legion is not just another tale of heroism but a saga filled with challenges, growth, and a relentless spirit. What captivates readers is the seamless blend of political intrigue, ancient prophecies, and dynamic battle scenes that maintain a brisk pace throughout the narrative. These elements, combined with a plot that thrives on unpredictability, ensure that the story remains engaging and fresh. "Apex World: Reincarnation of the Exalted Legion" offers a blend of fantasy, action, and adventure that is both refreshing and intriguing

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What makes this book interesting is the effort put into building the world and developing a plot that keeps you guessing. There's a nice mix of political intrigue, ancient prophecies, and battle scenes that keeps the pace moving.

This deserves a comic adaptation. Or maybe a AAA game based on it.

lol I was planning on giving this a review last night but I fell asleep but I had a dream about this so I guess it counts. Tbh it's a good read, I'll give it to you, but unfortunately it's only limited in chapters right now so I can't really say much other than I enjoyed it and it's genuinely going places as long as the author is consistent. thanks for the good read author 👍

I recently stumbled upon the novel "Apex World: Reincarnation of the Exalted Legion" and I must say, it has been an exhilarating ride so far. The author has managed to create a unique and captivating world filled with magic, adventure, and fascinating characters. The story follows the journey of a reincarnated exiled prince who finds himself in a world filled with powerful beings known as the Exalted Legion. From the very first chapter, I was hooked by the protagonist's determination and unwavering spirit as he navigates through this dangerous world, facing various challenges and enemies. What sets this novel apart is the well-developed world-building and the intricate plot that keeps you at the edge of your seat. The author has intricately woven together political intrigue, ancient prophecies, and epic battles that will leave readers wanting more. I also appreciate the author's keen attention to detail, as seen in the well-crafted fight scenes and descriptions of the different magical abilities of the characters. The dialogues are also witty and engaging, adding another layer of depth to the overall story. But what truly makes this novel a must-read is its diverse and well-developed characters. Each one has their own motivations, flaws, and unique backstories that make them feel like real individuals. The interactions between characters are realistic and add an emotional weight to the story. In conclusion, "Apex World: Reincarnation of the Exalted Legion" is an incredible novel that I highly recommend to anyone who enjoys fantasy, action, and adventure. The author's writing style, world-building, and character development make this a must-read for any book lover. I can't wait to see where the story goes next.

It has been interesting till chapter 4. Since the number of chapters is less, I can't understand some parts of the story. I think you will elaborate on it in future chapters. But from what I have read, everything is pretty good. Keep writing. I want to know what will happen soon.

love the system! As usual, I can't get enough of it. These post-apocalyptic world novels are the best and I love reading them. BTW this novel is well written and a few things were confusing me but otherwise, with the chapters posted so far, it's a good read.