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Sunny_Dream
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I find it funny that despite this story being in 1,8k collections, no one has commented on how 80% of it, whether its the plot or the sentences,is completly plagiarized on the fanfiction Annihilation maker DXD by Soul Caliber, the dxd part of the ff I mean, minus the well made chat room, the chad mc and the decent context behind the plot direction (there aren't any real transitions most things happen at the academy). I usually don't bother writting comment as I honestly don't care about these kind of story, they don't last long anyway. I gave it a chance based on the stats, it honestly was a waste of time and I would rather avoid a few more fellow readers to waste their time here as well, as the author is only teasing the single interessing plot change (imagine breaker) in between the plagiarism. Go watch the original work instead.

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DxD: The Illusion Killer

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Sunny_Dream
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I didn't mistake anything, even if he slightly changed some sentences, many other are straight up copy pasted without modifications. He began stealing since chapter 2. I don't know about the rest of the fic, I stop reading after a dozen or so chapter and not long after the 'author' asked how imagine breaker should affect devils, the guy doesn't even know what to do with his idea...

BlurryMoon252:I think you mistook this for something else. this a Story about the supposedly reincarnation? of Kamijou Touma its completely different from Annihilation maker. as far as I'm concerned and what do you mean the inly difference is that there's no group chat. that's a massive difference since that is the main part driving the Story forward in Annihilation Maker
Lin_Asora
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this is true i read that and even there points from the persona x dxd cross where the MC is manato

B6_12nn3
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I dunno man the author is removing all the negative comments of course no one will be seen mentioning it my own comment got removed because I mentioned how revealing his powers was a bad choice.

Qwerttipper
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plagarist??

MarkStillPlays_6071
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why haven't i seen this before, thanks webnovel👍👍

BlurryMoon252
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I think you mistook this for something else. this a Story about the supposedly reincarnation? of Kamijou Touma its completely different from Annihilation maker. as far as I'm concerned and what do you mean the inly difference is that there's no group chat. that's a massive difference since that is the main part driving the Story forward in Annihilation Maker

Alayashiki
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yeah i noticed that some of the paragraphs came from different Fanfics I've read, like the Soulcaliber's stuff especially when the MC is talking aboit jojo

Alayashiki
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also, the MC is literally just Touma but with a different name

Daoist4MxvaV
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wait so the only reason why u say the fanfic is similar to annihilation maker bc it's similar to JoJo bro that's a very minor difference bro this fanfic nothing like annihilation maker by soul caliber , the mc of annihilation maker is completely different from this fanfic mc , the annihilation maker mc is the exact representation of what if sasuke from naruto had adhd and was a psychopath who is also very annoying , the mc of this fanfic is a unlucky lovable idiot who just whats some peace in his life plus this story doesn't even have the chat group which was backbone of the annihilation maker fanfic , even if u really saw something similar at most it would be an inspiration not a copy

Alayashiki:yeah i noticed that some of the paragraphs came from different Fanfics I've read, like the Soulcaliber's stuff especially when the MC is talking aboit jojo
Daoist4MxvaV
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bro the only similarity btw the mc and touma is that they share the generic shounen protagonist traits and they both have imagine breaker , it's not a big deal

Alayashiki:also, the MC is literally just Touma but with a different name
Daoist4MxvaV
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nah i have seen annihilation maker and I Got stroke reading it

Lin_Asora:this is true i read that and even there points from the persona x dxd cross where the MC is manato
Daoist4MxvaV
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let me correct my self I met it's a very minor similarity

Alayashiki:yeah i noticed that some of the paragraphs came from different Fanfics I've read, like the Soulcaliber's stuff especially when the MC is talking aboit jojo
Daoist4MxvaV
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i know how u feel but him revealing his ability isn't necessarily a bad idea , it's more like gamble that could have a huge pay off , u are looking at this from the perspective of someone who has read fanfic where the main character has op abilities they can develop on their own without help . The mc of this fanfic isn't the same as other mcs , bc of imagine breaker he can't use magic and it's highly likely he can't use ki as well , and he can't gain any new abilities on his own like other mcs , his can't get stronger associating with rias and sona is a smart decision it guarantees him protection and the resources needed to possibly to control his imagine breaker . Hiding your ability from rias or sona is a very dumb idea if u actually want to get stronger

B6_12nn3:I dunno man the author is removing all the negative comments of course no one will be seen mentioning it my own comment got removed because I mentioned how revealing his powers was a bad choice.
Daoist4MxvaV
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don't listen him

Qwerttipper:plagarist??
Daoist4MxvaV
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don't listen him

Qwerttipper:plagarist??
Alayashiki
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Daoist4MxvaV:i know how u feel but him revealing his ability isn't necessarily a bad idea , it's more like gamble that could have a huge pay off , u are looking at this from the perspective of someone who has read fanfic where the main character has op abilities they can develop on their own without help . The mc of this fanfic isn't the same as other mcs , bc of imagine breaker he can't use magic and it's highly likely he can't use ki as well , and he can't gain any new abilities on his own like other mcs , his can't get stronger associating with rias and sona is a smart decision it guarantees him protection and the resources needed to possibly to control his imagine breaker . Hiding your ability from rias or sona is a very dumb idea if u actually want to get stronger
Daoist4MxvaV
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let me abbreviate , he stands to benefit more by telling them his abilities

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B6_12nn3
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I understand what you are saying. I was rather invested in the story at the start as I don't personally like op mc. I also have no problem of him becoming a peerage member of either of them as it is the most logical choice for a non op mc.but the problem lies in how the author handles this situation first he for no reason plays along with raynare and leaves her be for azazel and other fallens to track him then he goes on to reveal his secret to rias and Sona who in turn would have to inform this anomaly to their siblings which is equivalent of telling the us president about the existence of oil in some small unprotected country.

Daoist4MxvaV:i know how u feel but him revealing his ability isn't necessarily a bad idea , it's more like gamble that could have a huge pay off , u are looking at this from the perspective of someone who has read fanfic where the main character has op abilities they can develop on their own without help . The mc of this fanfic isn't the same as other mcs , bc of imagine breaker he can't use magic and it's highly likely he can't use ki as well , and he can't gain any new abilities on his own like other mcs , his can't get stronger associating with rias and sona is a smart decision it guarantees him protection and the resources needed to possibly to control his imagine breaker . Hiding your ability from rias or sona is a very dumb idea if u actually want to get stronger
Daoist4MxvaV
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so how should he have handled the situation bc I can't think of any other way he should have handled plus if sona or rias told sirzechs or serafall , what kind of big deal would that have made , both of them hate offending there siblings so is very unlikely they would do anything bad to the mc the most they would do is talk to him , also if he didn't go along with raynare wouldn't they just find another way to get to him , plus like it was said in the book the mc who has onky faced misfortune his entire life and whats somebody attention i doubt someone like that woukd think clearly

B6_12nn3:I understand what you are saying. I was rather invested in the story at the start as I don't personally like op mc. I also have no problem of him becoming a peerage member of either of them as it is the most logical choice for a non op mc.but the problem lies in how the author handles this situation first he for no reason plays along with raynare and leaves her be for azazel and other fallens to track him then he goes on to reveal his secret to rias and Sona who in turn would have to inform this anomaly to their siblings which is equivalent of telling the us president about the existence of oil in some small unprotected country.
Daoist4MxvaV
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sorry for the bad English i am in a hurry

B6_12nn3:I understand what you are saying. I was rather invested in the story at the start as I don't personally like op mc. I also have no problem of him becoming a peerage member of either of them as it is the most logical choice for a non op mc.but the problem lies in how the author handles this situation first he for no reason plays along with raynare and leaves her be for azazel and other fallens to track him then he goes on to reveal his secret to rias and Sona who in turn would have to inform this anomaly to their siblings which is equivalent of telling the us president about the existence of oil in some small unprotected country.