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Pretty sure mc doesn't care about being seen as the 'Leader', and Shen isn't stupid enough to not give him the light show or else Tai lung would rapidly get tired of him. to each one their own I suppose, chinese fighters are somewhat as respected as the chinese rulers and strategists in our world history, they are both obviously going down in history in their own way.
I didn't mistake anything, even if he slightly changed some sentences, many other are straight up copy pasted without modifications. He began stealing since chapter 2. I don't know about the rest of the fic, I stop reading after a dozen or so chapter and not long after the 'author' asked how imagine breaker should affect devils, the guy doesn't even know what to do with his idea...
I find it funny that despite this story being in 1,8k collections, no one has commented on how 80% of it, whether its the plot or the sentences,is completly plagiarized on the fanfiction Annihilation maker DXD by Soul Caliber, the dxd part of the ff I mean, minus the well made chat room, the chad mc and the decent context behind the plot direction (there aren't any real transitions most things happen at the academy). I usually don't bother writting comment as I honestly don't care about these kind of story, they don't last long anyway. I gave it a chance based on the stats, it honestly was a waste of time and I would rather avoid a few more fellow readers to waste their time here as well, as the author is only teasing the single interessing plot change (imagine breaker) in between the plagiarism. Go watch the original work instead.
You know, this chapter is too out of touch with the usual stuff. Just because Kuroto is sure that nobody is listening, and that he is certain Danzo will die, he tell him important informations ?The way you portrayed Kuroto until now is as a character who doesn't tell his secrets, someone who doesn't talk when there is no need to. He wouldn't reveal that much informations unless it benefit him, the guy would just go straight for the kill once he got what he wanted. Obviously Danzo attract attention and he can have an ace under his hand, Kuroto know Danzo can use izanagi so why take a risk ?I feel that chapter was very average, not because of the usual rants, but the pointless flex/information leak and the way Kuroto was portrayed as perhaps a bit too arrogant ? I would understand if he did it within Tsukihi, but not the main body.
Najenda did say she hoped Exdeath is being delayed by the northerner, but im pretty sure the northener are raiders and long term ennemies anw ? It would actually be better for the empire to get rid of them first, if things go wrong at her return, there is still the prime's minister teigu to either delete either Shura's teigu (shambala) or Exdeath's iice ower which would negate massively the threat.Also, the teigu destroyer, is it the manga or the anime version ?The anime's was a single use ring while the manga's was a crown that can be reused a week after its effect were forced upon a teigu.
Now come the time, the time of the chapters full of cursed content.How will the Chuuni doom angel and the Beautifull moon hag survive these more than usual weirder phenomenon ?Discover that in the next chapter, comming out in over a month on ff.net and Webnovel.(ty4the chapter btw).
Ever thought of having a pokemon have Pokerus ? With a time freezing storage it could be easy to preserve it and use the pokemon who have come out only when they require to lvl up, making them insane in the long term. Unless you straight up want to use items to increase EV's
Truth be told if you had given him OFA it would have been a heck of a fic. With Tomura being AFO's adopted son depsite being one of his nemesis descendant while All might adopted AFO's grandson (descendant) despite AFO being his nemesis. It would have been wicked.