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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

70 chapters of MC changing the plot and acting like some big shot and Sakumo story happen exactly the same way without any change, MC who should know the future acting like braineless youngmaster and pulling his sword to kill sakumo teammate for sprouting nonsense after everything is said and done.. when he literally had years to stop this or make preparation was just much brainless Chinese logic for me. It takes special kind of ret@ rd to have so little creativity.

The translation is perfect. however, the story, not so much. The MC becomes Kage level when he's like 9 years old. He helps kid Obito and Kakashi achieve similar strength. He crafts divine level weapons and artifacts and distributes them willy-nilly. He displayed prime Madara levels of strength during the war as a 10 year old. Basically, he is a really overpowered protagonist typical of self insert fan fictions. However, what really irks me is the fact that the entire population of the Naruto world has been dumbed down to accommodate this MC, all of them believe his stupid excuses about how he's able to accomplish such feats and how he has such artifacts that even kages would dream of. Additionally, all the Chinese elements in the story are impossible to pair properly with the Naruto world, when characters call each other "brother" or they eat medicinal cuisine, or they refine their Chakra to further their cultivation it just feels off to me.

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While it was interesting at first, the story kinda became dull with just how boring and uninteresting Kyomu is. Their is not much drive in him and he doesn't even have an interesting personality that really makes him fun to read. The chapters felt so dull and dragged on that i really wanted to skip chapters. These translated stories are rarely good.

Here is my honest review. First of all, take the book more like an original than a fanfic. As for Grammer, it's alright. although sometimes the names get mixed up, it's still good. Mc will not involve himself in romance until quite late in the story SPOILER Sakumo dies but it seems essential to the plot rather than irritating. Mc becomes strong from start but not to the point of being at six paths level in 6 Chapters. so it's enjoyable Mei and Yugito may be in the harem.

Good fanfic with slow paced story. Maybe ill changed my opinion about this after 100~150 or so chapters (because most CN novel has poison at mid~latter chapters)

Missing a villain tag. MC went from an upstanding character to full-blown mini Danzo.

Apesar de algumas coisas absurdas aqui e ali para crianças de 5 anos, essa história é fenomenal, sendo que o clima leve com que ela é levada e os momentos de comédia são perfeitos, faz muito tempo que eu n vejo uma história fanfic como essa. 5 estrelas com certeza.