That... was disappointing, FOR ME. I personally don't read the tags before reading something; I just read the synopsis, and if it appeals to me, I'll read it. That, unfortunately, was a mistake this time. Already in the first two chapters, the story captivated me a lot; the grammar is good, and the plot seems quite intriguing, and I really wanted to read it. However, in the third chapter, something clicked in my mind, and after thinking a little, I realized that there were women too many connected to MC in some way, so I understood where this was going. When this thought occurred to me, I finally understood what I had missed; this is a harem, and a big one at that. I hate harems, but I can't take away the merit of your author's story. The grammar is good, the plot seems very good and refreshing to read, the system is 'simple' but very useful and straightforward, the MC's skill is OP to a certain extent (very satisfactory), the missions don't seem like impossible missions to do, carried out at the moment by the MC, and without any logic that we normally see, and, finally, the MC is charismatic. I would love to read this, but I really hate harems from the bottom of my soul. I recommend it to anyone who likes it; it has potential.
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Thank you so much for the encouraging review. I appreciate the kind words and I understand how disappointed you might have been after noticing the harem tag. sadly the tag has been there since the first day I uploaded. I sincerely hope you find more books to your taste and who knows maybe one day I'll write a captivating non harem book that you'll enjoy as well.
how many are in the harem? if it's five or below it's fine to me since that will be easier to create dialogue and to not let the other harem members be buried, but if it's like 10 I can't see it as something more than just a pokemon collection
Don't worry, the number of harem won't be disappointing, also Zach has a unique way of having a rather interesting dialogue with the harem members
as long as the harem members don't get buried and not just become trophies that won't have any relevance to the story after the mc get with them then I will be fine
Then you have nothing to worry about
