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Well written, but a lot of fussing around trying to use "flowery" terms. Fifteen chapters that could be summarized, without losing their essence or impact, in seven or eight. Thanks for your work, but I'm out.

I'm getting out. The height of stupidity is here, folks! RUN AWAY!

fucking idiotic protagonist

What was that I read? I'm out

Damn, this is good! The writing here reminds me a lot of Shadow Slave, which makes it a delight to read. I didn’t have much hope when I clicked to start reading, but as I read more, I got more immersed, and before I knew it, I had already read all the available chapters. I believe that if you change your cover to a more professional one (made by AI, in other words...) and avoid falling into clichés, this has immense potential. Keep writing and let your imagination flow without limits, author. Impress us!

Just a curiosity: I never removed your book from my library, I couldn't. I was still waiting 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Thank you very much. Reading your story, however short, was great. I hope everything works out in your personal life and if you do start writing again, be sure to reply to one of my old comments if possible so that I know when you're back. It would be great to be able to read one of your stories again. You're amazing man. Good luck out there!

For me, when I'm very motivated, I can write a chapter of 1800 (10000 characters) words in 1h30. When I'm low on ideas or unmotivated, it takes me up to 3 hours.

At this point I believe the author died suddenly, lost his account or simply didn't want to write anymore. I think it's time to take this out of my library, it was a good 69 chapters, I really enjoyed it and I wish it had gone far. Ah, it's so sad to have to remove this from my library🫠🥲

I still have hope that someday I will open my library and see that new chapters have been released for this..