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BoNe_of_mY_SwORd
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the thing with novels is if u want people to spend money on them , u need to get them hooked or at least curious enough to read past the free chapters . this one didn't manage to do that with me . the writing could be much better. the constantly shifting povs in the beginning, weird info dumps and complex classifications just makes it much harder to read . also i understand if his parents didn't want to teach him how to fight so that he could get a better technique later but why didn't they teach him anything? nothing about rifts or even how to use a monster core . and he barely uses his system. it's supposed to be his power why not use it ?

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RighteousFilth
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I could swear I didn't shift POVs in the beginning, lol, maybe I'm not that experienced yet. I'm sincerely sorry you were not gripped by the story and found it to be irritating but I also think it's a matter of preference, I wish I could do more to make you more interested though