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i feel called out bruh đ
the thing with novels is if u want people to spend money on them , u need to get them hooked or at least curious enough to read past the free chapters . this one didn't manage to do that with me . the writing could be much better. the constantly shifting povs in the beginning, weird info dumps and complex classifications just makes it much harder to read . also i understand if his parents didn't want to teach him how to fight so that he could get a better technique later but why didn't they teach him anything? nothing about rifts or even how to use a monster core . and he barely uses his system. it's supposed to be his power why not use it ?
how about this ( had to screenshot it . wasn't uploading otherwise )
if u think this was tobirama going all out , then bro , u need to watch naruto again đ
time for that granussy
keep fighting him daddy raga . also , keep sucking gege
The story is slow asf which i usually don't have a problem with but here the author deliberately slows it down . The only thing it will lead to is a writers block . instead of making himself stronger with his system or even building up his company he decides to play hero for some ungodly reason .i think the author forgot that this is marvel and not Pokemon đ
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should have gone with divine general
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