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RovontheusLv45mth
2024-09-11 18:55

First of all, I enjoy reading this book but it has many flaws unless you learn the Dao of Brain sealing logic! The translation is very good, it's 5 stars for me. but theres a plot hole, MC is a fake prince who took his place, just so the prince can sneak out and enjoy and avoid his father brutal training. Here's the twist, the prince can't cultivate and has a history of assassination attempt, so how tf can he sneak out with cultivators guarding the mansion not to mention he would have a secret guard. MC as a coachman who resembles the prince like a twin brother would have been spotted and stayed under surveillance under the Duke long ago since he basically works in the Duke territory, but somehow the prince and his maid found out and replaced him magically without anyone finding out? MC history - His Dad is an emperor of a different dynasty, but lost a war and got killed by the Prince father, the Duke. In this world only people with royal bloodline can cultivate spiritual cultivation the rest cultivate martial dao. When a royal bloodline is killed, there's a heavenly phenomenon, which even a tenth stage cultivator is unable to stop that's the sole reason why the Duke didn't kill MC after taking his bloodline for the prince. Even after getting stripped of the bloodline there will be a heavenly phenomenon which is absurd. MC maid or should i say the prince maid, only these two know that the prince left the Duke mansion and within a few days the maid slept with the MC? like how tf bruh! the way it was executed was makes no sense. On top of that she tried hard to help MC just cause she lost her virginity? bruh that maid grew up with the prince, it was clearly written, a human would definitely not behave that way unless they got a screw loose. sure she might be under pressure of the fake prince being found out but that was it, she would definitely reject the MC advances plus she was a cultivator. How can someone forget all the childhood memories they spend together for a fake prince aka coachman. The emperor managed to find out MC is fake? the novel says through aura he found out. Afterwards MC got a heavenly treasure from system and manage to hide his aura but his parents still checked his pulse and energy or whatever its called but they thought it was normal? Even if they cant scan him with spiritual sense, if they touch him they should still be able discover it a fake right? After all the prince dad regularly trains him and check his body in details to figure out how to let his son cultivate so he must know about his internal structure and energy composition. The prince Dad got a huge force that runs like an intelligence gathering and protection organisation to check on nobles, so the fact that the prince swapping wasnt discover makes no sense. The MC personality is dull and hard to understand even after reading 100 chapters. so many plotholes. The way the author kept bashing the prince, these chinese writers cant stand side characters. Characters are kinda dumb the only reason i even bother reading this far was due to the writing quality and my stable dao heart. my dao heart doesn't waver the slightest even with all the bullshitery of reading nonsense and illogical stuff.

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DoomofTennosLv15

thank you.. saved me from picking this up

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