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Mystero
MysteroLv121yr
2024-03-03 19:31

51 chapters. The story is slow. Chapters are short. The story itself is a most cliche story of HP you can do. You will not find anything new or interesting in this fic. The writing quality is good. Characters are for the most part 50IQ less then their original counter parts. Its one of those the wrong boy who lived plotlines with bad dumbledore, stupid lily/james etc. If you have never read a single HP fanfic then its for you. Otherwise there is no point in actually reading this.

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ChikinBorger
ChikinBorgerLv4

I don't understand why stories like this get so many power stones. Like, power stones can be useful for determining whether or not a story is worth at least trying out. Yet, other times total trash has numerous stones. Like, I remember that one in which a MAN dies and his spirit goes to DxD and he possesses Kuroka and...things go from there. It has very little attention for webnovel (like, tens of thousands of views I think?) and yet something like five hundred power stones.

Hush19
Hush19Lv15

Disagree, when it comes to HP fabrication this is a breath of fresh air

Na1gel
Na1gelLv4

ah, yeah read a couple of chapters and this is exactly like all the other 100 with the" wrong boy who lives" plot with stupid lilly/james and bad dumbel :'D ... im sure there is something unique with this one but the overall feeling and tone of the story is the exact same as all the others fanfics that have this theme

Daoist_Dan
Daoist_DanLv10

This. It has a lot of played out tropes.

Daoist_Dan
Daoist_DanLv10

You can't trust view counts either. I've found fanfiction gems with basically no views while complete trash is in the millions. How?

ChikinBorger:I don't understand why stories like this get so many power stones. Like, power stones can be useful for determining whether or not a story is worth at least trying out. Yet, other times total trash has numerous stones. Like, I remember that one in which a MAN dies and his spirit goes to DxD and he possesses Kuroka and...things go from there. It has very little attention for webnovel (like, tens of thousands of views I think?) and yet something like five hundred power stones.
Avi_Rohilla
Avi_RohillaLv13

some gems that you would like to refer me to?? i cannot find good ones

Daoist_Dan:You can't trust view counts either. I've found fanfiction gems with basically no views while complete trash is in the millions. How?
SouthEast
SouthEastLv13

lubagun babygirl um me !oklkk kikklikllkkolkollmkkk

Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv10

Stop the cap

Hush19:Disagree, when it comes to HP fabrication this is a breath of fresh air
Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv10

You can check my list I found lot of gems that got dropped

Avi_Rohilla:some gems that you would like to refer me to?? i cannot find good ones
Jonathan_Lam_2034
Jonathan_Lam_2034Lv4

really? These tropes have been used since like 2005

Hush19:Disagree, when it comes to HP fabrication this is a breath of fresh air
Hush19
Hush19Lv15

Idk brother, there are maybe 4 readable wbwl fanfics that aren’t complete and utter dog trash, and maybe half of those are finished

Lordmoonlight:Stop the cap
EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

why did you lie

Wizardlyllc
WizardlyllcLv14

and yet you read it if you don't like it then make your own fanfic

Charles_Mizell
Charles_MizellLv3

preesh

CTHULHU_YOGSOTHOTH
CTHULHU_YOGSOTHOTHLv4

I would Say the HP: Call me mr Error was one of the best ones

Hush19:Disagree, when it comes to HP fabrication this is a breath of fresh air
CTHULHU_YOGSOTHOTH
CTHULHU_YOGSOTHOTHLv4

HP×Lotm: Call me Mr error The Tower Sage Reverend Insanity The throne of Nothingness Last 2 ones are Villain ones

Avi_Rohilla:some gems that you would like to refer me to?? i cannot find good ones
Gilgamesh_Sage
Gilgamesh_SageLv11

recommend some for me my friend

Daoist_Dan:You can't trust view counts either. I've found fanfiction gems with basically no views while complete trash is in the millions. How?
Daoist_Dan
Daoist_DanLv10

Check out Veganmaster's account if you haven't. I've read everything except the hxh and one piece fanfics and they're good reads.

Gilgamesh_Sage:recommend some for me my friend
Gilgamesh_Sage
Gilgamesh_SageLv11

Thanks I got it but I've read his books except the budha one

Daoist_Dan:Check out Veganmaster's account if you haven't. I've read everything except the hxh and one piece fanfics and they're good reads.
Gilgamesh_Sage
Gilgamesh_SageLv11

recommend others for me brother

Daoist_Dan:Check out Veganmaster's account if you haven't. I've read everything except the hxh and one piece fanfics and they're good reads.
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