I didn't understand the first chapter and the beginning is a bit confusing but other than this every thing else is good .
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LIKEI am a beginner author and I must admit that I had a hard time starting, I didn't want to do chapters on the beginning of Jon Snow's life as a nurse so I summarized all of that in the first chapter. Sorry if this seemed weird to you maybe once the story is finished. I will go back and do 5 or 10 chapters on Jon Snow OC's childhood in detail. Beyond that I thank you for your support you don't know how important it is, Before being a writer I am a reader and all I want is to entertain as many people as possible with my stories like I would have liked to be in your place. I don't speak English but I'm trying to translate using an automatic translator
How you gonna have a confusing first chapter and no synopsis. Am I supposed to magically turn into a detective and analyze yo shi?
Don't worry, I try to take all criticism as long as it's based on the right side to improve my story. And I really forgot to do my synopsis so thank you for reminding me. I hope you have a good time and if you have any comments or questions, go ahead, I'll try to take the time to answer everyone.
I hold stories that make the collection ranking in high regard that’s why I was a lil angry you didn’t have a synopsis.