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Arzoch
ArzochLv51yr
2024-05-09 13:29

I really enjoyed it so far, up to about chapter 110. the main character is very ruthless but is kind to his love ones. sometimes I feel the love part is a bit off, like placement wise and perhaps spammed too much. Also he became brothers with someone in 1 day, and kinda let himself be used and dragged into a nobles fight. I can just see how the pointless fight will lead to them be tracked down by his mother's family. I wish it didn't have to be so obvious. maybe they could have changed there names at the very least and wore disguises. I highly recommend the book and feel at has good potential. I am looking forward to the next story arc.

Reincarnated in the Astral World

LamenThief
4.5
150 Chs

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LamenThief
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5 Stars because you have to love what you write, or it will fail. Now, about the novel, you can expect good adventures, good action, good romance, good vibes, and the "good stuff." Hope you all enjoy it, but if you don't, thanks for the try anyway.

1yr

Spirit_Immortal
Spirit_ImmortalLv4

SPOILER !! DONT'TTOUCH IT i like big harem..........which is here (not sure if has big harem yet) i hate yuri.........which is not here i like win CEST.... .which is here i like ruthless mc ...which is here i like good plot...... which is here i like romance ......which is here i like good character development ........which is here so I Dont need any more reasons to give 5stars

1yr
Tr0xk
Tr0xkLv15

Really loving everything so far, and am excited to see where the story goes. PS- (Who doesn’t love a cute succubus stuck with a MC from day one… better yet a shy tsundere succubus?)

1yr
Gluttonous_Reader
Gluttonous_ReaderLv15

Great story so far! I can't wait to see how it progresses.

1yr
Outer_CAT_God01
Outer_CAT_God01Lv3

bro all your works are on hiatus and why the fuck did you stop writing new chapters in Lk and this one please start uploading if you don't have any issues you said that you will start uploading Lk chaps after settling this one and it's been over 11 months now how long is "settling down" to you bro 😞

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Ultra_Orlando_
Ultra_Orlando_Lv15

This novel is unforgettable. Even after not reading weeks/months at a time, the story and characters stay with me. It's beautifully written, and I can recall it vividly without needing to reread. It has just enough consistency without having to stress about little character developments and introducing enough new characters. For a working adult with not much time to read -I am satisfied reading every chapter. Great work.

7mth
SWORDGOD_ETERNITY
SWORDGOD_ETERNITYLv4

Arthur why don't you do 2 or 3 ch in a week instead of 1 you know it just to slow 🐌

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Lucien121
Lucien121Lv15

Reveal spoiler

1yr
N0tAWriter
N0tAWriterLv1

Nice start for a novel. Though it is a bit rough around the edges, it has the potential to be a really good read. 5 stars for encouragement and keep working hard!

1yr
Lord_Raven
Lord_RavenLv2

Reveal spoiler

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