The novel's idea and world are very interesting, not to mention the addition of astral beasts; at first, it was nice to see a novel where the father wasn't dead or made useless, only to let the MC end up with their mother. Sadly, this happens, and all development toward a balanced family ends. There is no inc*st tag, but there will be some, which isn't my thing. The characters are alright; the women feel like carbon copies of each other because of the scent thing, and all fall for him easily, but the MC himself is interesting and has a very dynamic difference in his two sides and should interest anyone who reads for sure. The power system lacks depth, suffers the same as LK, and is wishy-washy at best. While the action is average, it has some good parts despite being weaker than many current novels. As for writing, quality remains the same as LK, and there is little improvement between the two. The usage of italics also makes it difficult to read, but it's better than many novels on WN, so give it a read while you’ve nothing to do. There are a lot of good ideas countering the negative.
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Hmm, well, balance is overrated and boring in my opinion, and each have their own tastes. Better to assign the family a role if it's there, than keep them as distant side chars who are nothing more than tools for plot. Also, the power system hasn't even been developed yet, since the novel has 30 chaps, so it's impossible to say if it has depth or not based on just that. After all, it's not a system novel where the name of the System already tells you all you need to know.
