While it good to see more overlord fanfics I personal think if the sorry is 10 chapters along and there no sign of you going to the new world the story is a waste of time. I think if you do more character development flashbacks of interaction work better while you continue with the main story. Because after you are finish and you to the new world are you doing to mention that other guild member and previous relations .
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Hello Dear Reader! Thanks for your review! [Now, what you suggested may/could have worked but there were a few things:- 1) I wanted to focus more on the game(Yggdrasil) itself as very few fics do so. 2)I have some changes which if introduced with your method, I might have some trouble writing but more experienced writers may be able to do so. 3) The job classes, skills, NPC, etc. the MC created/acquired would not have made sense if not explained beforehand and if explained mid-story might feel like info dumps. (At least according to me. {I may be wrong.})] Thats all! I hope you understand my reasons and continue to enjoy the novel! Goodbye!
no love interest/s?
Shadowstorm30:Hello Dear Reader! Thanks for your review! [Now, what you suggested may/could have worked but there were a few things:- 1) I wanted to focus more on the game(Yggdrasil) itself as very few fics do so. 2)I have some changes which if introduced with your method, I might have some trouble writing but more experienced writers may be able to do so. 3) The job classes, skills, NPC, etc. the MC created/acquired would not have made sense if not explained beforehand and if explained mid-story might feel like info dumps. (At least according to me. {I may be wrong.})] Thats all! I hope you understand my reasons and continue to enjoy the novel! Goodbye!
Hello Dear Reader! I have planned 1 love interest for the MC not more than that.
Crom_Darkstar:no love interest/s?
