Review Detail of TOFIE in The Architect [Solo Leveling]

IAmCompletelyLost:so many words to say nothing at the same time :/

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5imply_lucid:Bro just say the chapters are short. Also there are no canon events yet. The hospital has to happen because he was found unconscious... What did you expect the Association to do?, leave him there when they write somewhat at fault Also no character in solo leveling is thought out... You only think so now because like me, you've read better books

Enormiity:First of all, what do you mean by 'Also, no character in Solo Leveling is well thought out... you only think so now because... books'? That sentence is confusing to read; is it meant to be positive or negative? Secondly, here is some advice regarding your story: Stop publishing such small chapters every day; instead, post one bigger chapter once in a while. Right now, at least for the 15 chapters I've read, your story feels disjointed with nearly useless chapter titles.

5imply_lucid:Talk what you may, if you wanted to enjoy the story you will 2. No character in solo leveling is thought out because if they were then you would have a more indepth story about them. Look at the chairman, you know absolutely nothing about him. Then boom. He goes from S-rank to National Level hunter National Level Hunters were initially people who just had very powerful abilities and developed it but boom!.. They are now Fragments of brilliant light If Solo leveling was thought out the Dragon Monarch would be under the Beast Monarch because guess what, a dragon still falls under a beast If it was thought out, the entire war wouldn't even reach Earth or make Earth it's center... There was no reason as to why the Rulers were trying to preserve Earth There was no reason to the Rulers approving of Jin Woo's request to rewind time once more.... It was a foolish and risky move on their part. They told us that each celestial retains their memory even after time is rewinded but the Monarchs acted as though it was their first time meeting Jin Woo A thought out story will define the characters even side charscters, have a good power system that allows for growth, a well defined enemy etc. Solo Leveling has none of these things, they only define characters that help push the plot Sung Jinho but even then he is made to be more of a slave no personality of his own Mr Go Gunhee, only appears for convenience sake... To make Jin Woo look bigger Do you want more reasons why it wasn't thought out or not If you want thought out books then read Library of Heaven's path Reverend insanity Solo Leveling is a copy of a different manhwa that follows the Dungeon. Gate system but because the author wrote it as a book, he needed to add in a bit more lore than them.

Scarface3699:if ur not trying to be better why r u even trying ?

5imply_lucid:Talk what you may, if you wanted to enjoy the story you will 2. No character in solo leveling is thought out because if they were then you would have a more indepth story about them. Look at the chairman, you know absolutely nothing about him. Then boom. He goes from S-rank to National Level hunter National Level Hunters were initially people who just had very powerful abilities and developed it but boom!.. They are now Fragments of brilliant light If Solo leveling was thought out the Dragon Monarch would be under the Beast Monarch because guess what, a dragon still falls under a beast If it was thought out, the entire war wouldn't even reach Earth or make Earth it's center... There was no reason as to why the Rulers were trying to preserve Earth There was no reason to the Rulers approving of Jin Woo's request to rewind time once more.... It was a foolish and risky move on their part. They told us that each celestial retains their memory even after time is rewinded but the Monarchs acted as though it was their first time meeting Jin Woo A thought out story will define the characters even side charscters, have a good power system that allows for growth, a well defined enemy etc. Solo Leveling has none of these things, they only define characters that help push the plot Sung Jinho but even then he is made to be more of a slave no personality of his own Mr Go Gunhee, only appears for convenience sake... To make Jin Woo look bigger Do you want more reasons why it wasn't thought out or not If you want thought out books then read Library of Heaven's path Reverend insanity Solo Leveling is a copy of a different manhwa that follows the Dungeon. Gate system but because the author wrote it as a book, he needed to add in a bit more lore than them.

sixpathsofsimp:bro it not even fair to compare Reverend Insanity with solo leveling, Reverend Insanity is one of the few masterpiece

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5imply_lucid:Just had to be use it as an example