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Kabuk5
Kabuk5Lv141yr
2024-02-06 20:28

Misleading title, no template system, -> Supposedly an equivalent exchange system but the character is extorted at the beginning to get his "cheat", main character is super annoying also, two chapters was too much. I apologize if I was too rough, but really, you just took a massive dump over your character.

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Badwriter
BadwriterLv4

how is it misleading it literally only states 'with shanks template' no where does it say a template system

Saitama_Wave
Saitama_WaveLv14

" Just from the title and i like shank so i will give it 5 stars ☝️🤓"

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Saitama_Wave
Saitama_WaveLv14

Badwriter:how is it misleading it literally only states 'with shanks template' no where does it say a template system
Kabuk5
Kabuk5Lv14

A template usually refers to a template system, otherwise the title would be "in Naruto with Shank's powers"

Saitama_Wave:" Just from the title and i like shank so i will give it 5 stars ☝️🤓"
Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

but that doesn't make sense , template doesn't mean template system , u sound like someone who read so many template related systems that anytime u see the word template u think of system

Kabuk5:A template usually refers to a template system, otherwise the title would be "in Naruto with Shank's powers"
DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

why even argue if thats your dumb*ss logic? lol 😆 🤣 😂 😹 😆 🤣 😂. 5 stars just because a character is referenced. lol good for you i guess, hes a cool character and all, but that just means your opinions nd reviews mean absolutely nothing.

Saitama_Wave:" Just from the title and i like shank so i will give it 5 stars ☝️🤓"
Saitama_Wave
Saitama_WaveLv14

Right? Just find any Fanfic and you get this in the review section. Every time.

DetachedDreamer:why even argue if thats your dumb*ss logic? lol 😆 🤣 😂 😹 😆 🤣 😂. 5 stars just because a character is referenced. lol good for you i guess, hes a cool character and all, but that just means your opinions nd reviews mean absolutely nothing.
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Quin_Bland
Quin_BlandLv15

If so many other template system based novels use that title framework that it's almost become synonymous, then who's really the weird one here? If I say I made you eggs for breakfast, and you're upset because I give you caviar, are you wrong because I never said "chicken eggs" but that's what you thought of first, or am I being weird for giving you fish eggs?

Daoist4MxvaV:but that doesn't make sense , template doesn't mean template system , u sound like someone who read so many template related systems that anytime u see the word template u think of system
Unpaid_FoxGod
Unpaid_FoxGodLv14

its been a standard here that template system based stories put "template" in the title, Its not impossible to mistaken them.

Daoist4MxvaV:but that doesn't make sense , template doesn't mean template system , u sound like someone who read so many template related systems that anytime u see the word template u think of system
Na1gel
Na1gelLv4

Saitama_Wave:" Just from the title and i like shank so i will give it 5 stars ☝️🤓"
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