Well, first; this story is amazing, at first I had little esteem for the fact that the MC has the power of a Minecraft creative menu, however, when I immersed myself in the story, I knew right away that I would love it, starting with the fact that the protagonist is still a normal human, that yes, making use of his tricks he can be almost unbeatable, although not turning him into an op immediately, the author makes us immerse ourselves in his story in a wonderful way, and although in the story barely three days have passed, and for some it may seem slow, I can assure you that it is not boring, since the author's way of writing makes us lose track of time.

Currently at chapter 6. MC is still discovering his power and he already has some fanatic follower's, who'll do anything to making him the greatest. Anyways there still time for more improvement, hope to see author release 50 chapters before be drops.

The blood was spilled only regrets remained The look of horror in the eyes, and despair vivid on the face His body met with iron, painted the snow red. His gaze engulfed by darkness Death upon him descend In the Fire he shall turn to ashes But his watch has yet to end.

Since I can't be a ghost reader for a chapter I will give some feedback. Great story so far with a really interesting concept. Wouldn't have thought of it before except that I saw another story with the same concept only with modded minecraft and written less in my taste. Like the structure of your chapters are great with both describtions and what he is doing in good proportions maybe a bit more interactions, but that will also come late probably. Also great pacing so far. Maybe a thing that you could add is pictures of the buildings he build and things like that. I am curious how a wither would look and if he builds a beacon when he starts building his own city.

Me parece interesante el concepto del fanfic. El sistema de minecraft es muy bueno pero me ubiera gustado mas sin el creativo o un mundo privado aparte de donde sacar recursos no personas ya que juego de tronos se trata de la intriga y utilización de la gente. Podría ser el mejor comerciante, con los cofres. El mejor guerrero con las armas y armaduras encantadas. El mejor señor con la construcción.

I loved this novel until the author ruined it by changing the character of mc From a person who a few chapters ago was regretting the state of women who marry at a young age to a crazy person who will kill a child to take advantage of his father. Don't get me wrong, I don't hate the evil character. What I hate is fooling the reader with this change The novel was enjoyable, but don't bother yourself if you don't like the character change, especially since the chapters of this novel are long. (Google Translate)

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