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2024-06-03 00:27

quite a good translation and the story is good but quite low character development

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While i appreciate the TL for his hardwork, the orginal source material is complete mess and it sour the whole reading experience. (1) Everyone around mc is super dumb, he keep showing new ability and the scientist and solider thinks he was hiding them so they keep sening wave after wave of attack without considering any other possibility. Its like 1st round 10 solider, 2nd round 15 solider, 3rd round 20 solider + 1 sentinel etc... you get the point. MC also for variouis reason unable to kill top bosses so this meaninless chain mission can continue. (2) Prof.X and Magneto knowing omega level mutant was detected in that area keep on watching camera footage of mc fight against army while making radom expressions instead of doing anything meaningful, author turn them into peanut gallery. (3) Classic xianxia dialogue like mutant you have eyes but cant see the hight of our army, this time we catch you in 10min/20min/30min, OMG how did he have this power, how could lowly mutant hide so many things, give up or our ancestor...ahem i mean supervisor won't let you go etc... (4) MC get attack by all known organization under the sun. If army is on cooldown mutant underworld organization come and try to enslave him, if they are on cooldown he even get mugged by thug. Constant forced conflict to make him slow down his growth or attack with just enough power so he can barely beat them...Rinse and repeat. Till ch50, i didnt find any real storyline except constant mess of forced fights and blood pressure raising xianxia cliches.

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