Abhishek_Singh_9897

Veldnava bless him

Snape's gonna get wet after looking at lan

So, it seems the MC is both too stupid as well as very honest As he forgot that there are many beings capable of spying on him and his past and it also includes kang who stays at the end of space and time who may not be able to see his future due to uncertainty and butterfly effect but could still see his action in the past that includes this secret of his. And, lastly if he wants to be so honest with them then why didn't he told them about his plan of wooing and adding many female girlfriends to his harem? Or does his honesty is only limited to making one of the most stupidest decision of his of revealing his hole cards on which his whole life depends. And once some super strong beings find the ways to temporarily sever or block his connection to his system and all the powers and abilities given to him by it he will only be a fish on a chopping board. so well done!

As one would expect from a typical chinese author

It's fine if the mc is op but he is too stupid I mean who the hell goes around openly telling others about their ultimate skills their number, what they do and all that. I mean ultimate skills are one of the most secret trump cards for strong beings in tensura and he goes around telling other that he has an intelligent speaking skill, infinite magicule breeder, can destroy everything thing and create anything he desire like he has been acting to dumb on one side he say that he doesn't want to become to strong from the start but openly using his skills without trying to hide them like he wants the world to know that how op he is and also making all his subordinates too strong by just naming them making everyone at least at the level of s class monsters Also their are some grammatical mistakes fast paced story development world background is good and a really good long story can be written and continuously over story is good but needs some character development.

Yeah Spiderman 🕷️🕸️ was american so he wore Red and Blue that didn't appeal much to him as he is Chinese so he would go with Red alongwith yellow stars

Probably some kind of cultural habit of exaggerating too much in every minor action or topic

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