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Kaba_Baka
Kaba_BakaLv31yr
2024-04-15 10:56

a few mistakes in using/spelling words. the narrative is a bit bias, likely to push the aim of the story. a few characters I felt are made out of character. overall a very interesting story. I wouldn't mind finding out how this ends. keep up the work.

American comics start with level 5 mutant

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hero4hire
hero4hireLv11

While i appreciate the TL for his hardwork, the orginal source material is complete mess and it sour the whole reading experience. (1) Everyone around mc is super dumb, he keep showing new ability and the scientist and solider thinks he was hiding them so they keep sening wave after wave of attack without considering any other possibility. Its like 1st round 10 solider, 2nd round 15 solider, 3rd round 20 solider + 1 sentinel etc... you get the point. MC also for variouis reason unable to kill top bosses so this meaninless chain mission can continue. (2) Prof.X and Magneto knowing omega level mutant was detected in that area keep on watching camera footage of mc fight against army while making radom expressions instead of doing anything meaningful, author turn them into peanut gallery. (3) Classic xianxia dialogue like mutant you have eyes but cant see the hight of our army, this time we catch you in 10min/20min/30min, OMG how did he have this power, how could lowly mutant hide so many things, give up or our ancestor...ahem i mean supervisor won't let you go etc... (4) MC get attack by all known organization under the sun. If army is on cooldown mutant underworld organization come and try to enslave him, if they are on cooldown he even get mugged by thug. Constant forced conflict to make him slow down his growth or attack with just enough power so he can barely beat them...Rinse and repeat. Till ch50, i didnt find any real storyline except constant mess of forced fights and blood pressure raising xianxia cliches.

1yr

George_Vasiliu
George_VasiliuLv3

MC acts like an NPC top to bottom ...opponents come in waves of progresive number and level like in some tower defense .""Okey we lost 10 people this time...let's send 11 next that will surely kill him!!!"" He defeats an enemy wave...waits around and complains when the next one comes even though he's in the same spot THIS IS INSANE

1yr
Kil0
Kil0Lv4

Translation quality is quite good. Story is fun and exciting. Unfortunately, the Chinese author is pretty racist against white and black people. It isn’t to the point of ruining the novel but definitely a little annoying and distracting

1yr
Experienced_weeb
Experienced_weebLv4

just putting this here to check but another translator Zaelum is also doing this book I don't know who started first just putting this out there

9mth
Daoista6s
Daoista6sLv1

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Lady_Dady
Lady_DadyLv1

chased like prey. looked at as if he were nothing more than a monster for entertainment. Everyone can only be afraid but nothing more, because their IQ has been lowered by the author. You can't consider him a masochist, but if you read and pay attention you will notice that he likes to suffer.

8mth
Devil_Gamer_0071
Devil_Gamer_0071Lv2

Why does it seem like i read this somewhere . The MC named syd 🤔 yeah? ... ....,...........,...........,....... ......,...........,...........,....... .......,...........,...........,....... ... ...

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Abhishek_Singh_9897
Abhishek_Singh_9897Lv4

quite a good translation and the story is good but quite low character development

10mth
Lord_Shadow_Galaxy
Lord_Shadow_GalaxyLv2

Cool, you can have fun if you ignore the stupidities, but don't expect something good, or who can say, great. If you don't have anything else interesting to read, read it.

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