Starts off fairly all right but the cracks are clearly showing by chapter 25-26; idioms clearly being out of place and goku being referred to as Wukong. Clear signs (in my opinion) that it's a translated novel... Maybe even machine translated. Nothing is wrong with that inherently but at the same time it leads to some very nonsensical plot contrivances for those of us who know the common logic of the western world. If it's not translated then... Well, then there is no excuse for some of the silliness that happens.

Trash novel, the author used a pathetic reason to make the protagonist weaker than he should be, he also does not understand the power of a sayajin, Goku was capable of resisting bullets with only 40 power and was capable of moving at 4970 m /s with 5000 power, it would have been more interesting if he had been reincarnated at the time when he was a baby and not a teenager, like I said before, just an excuse to nerf him.

Author uses a lot of emote faces. Mc was on automode until he was 15 yo.

horrible dialog okay story promise, but god awful mash up of so many different worlds and really bad plotlines. This story is such a mess that thier is no saving it unless it has a full rewrite/edit. From having clark a child of 10 takr care of a baby. to a stupid eating contest that takes up way too much plot. To him conveniently wanting to leave school. cause author didnt want to make any stories involving the school i guess? its just a mess of bad plotlines and bad dialog.

It started off good but I slowly noticed the translation errors that get worse and worse the farther you read into this story. Maybe if he had an editor to fix those noticeable slip ups that ruin this story then maybe there would be something decent to read here. that doesn't seem likely tho.

es una mierda la historia, se tardan tantos capítulos en una sola acción y lo peor son los capítulos después de los 200, mas adelante digamos que kara viola a nuestro protagonista y a el simplemente no le importa o no se que tiene en la cabeza.

I found the actual title. Title: 超人的赛亚人弟弟

Qual o link da obra original?? . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Well... This is a translation, Likely from chinese, so there is no point in commenting or trying to tell things to the translator [img=faceslap]