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LastGodLv46mth
2024-05-08 00:37

horrible dialog okay story promise, but god awful mash up of so many different worlds and really bad plotlines. This story is such a mess that thier is no saving it unless it has a full rewrite/edit. From having clark a child of 10 takr care of a baby. to a stupid eating contest that takes up way too much plot. To him conveniently wanting to leave school. cause author didnt want to make any stories involving the school i guess? its just a mess of bad plotlines and bad dialog.

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Daoist_Dan
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So he could transfer to a school Kara Danvers and Barry Allen attend in Missouri. Yup. You read that last part right.

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